This is actually a top tier novel just use different sites to read it.

The military usually doesn’t teach you to much about actual combat much less h2h more or so the military teaches you how to use guns, tactics, and basic h2h it doesn’t even go too in depth. So I would assume it works the same here

How dare you blueball us with this cliffhanger banger chapter though. Keep up the good work.

No it was not obvious.

Ren is cooking her in the next chapter that is all you gotta know.

Hey man I love the book hope you don’t drop it. Have a merry Christmas and a 5 star review. Also thank you for making this novel it is one of the best I have ever read.

Thank you for the chapter really interested into what you will do in the next chapter.

1.When are you updating the story? 2. Recently I found some of the newer chapters to a bit boring but once it reached chap 228 I was reminded as to why I love this novel it’s detail and how in depth the world is example flying isn’t just propeling yourself up in the air it’s described as a form of art a dance. 3. I feel truly immersed as I read this novel as if I am Ren Hilton himself this story is amazing 4. Apparently some website has uploaded chap 233-234 while it still hasn’t been released yet to non-privileged it’s called noveltop1. So I reccomemd you just release 233-235 as opposed to 233-234 so you may be able to recover some of the lost profits

Overall I would say this chapter is 5/10

NGL this IMO is your worst chapter of your entire career as writer but I understand you might be working in a deadline and is very stressed right now. I feel like you need to take a break from writing for a while to get a refresher. NihilRuler did it and his quality of writing got better point is take care of your mental health and take a break for a while even if you go on hiatus for 2months

Thanks for the chapter and look I know you are busy writing this novel but when will NMPFTV update? It’s been 3 days since it updated in my country at least. Ps. This novel keeps getting better I am interested to know whether this novel has a connection to your previous works in terms of lore.

I used up all my points to give this serious more popularity. I really like this novel I just wish upates were faster.

Meets the expectations I had set based of your previous work so 8/10

I dunno about this. Mary complete rejected every advance Ren made and when Ren was in the precept of getting new friends she obstructed it cause she was jealous of him. What is worse she only likes the feeling that Ren was going to wait for her. Worst of all she tried to trigger Ren when he was doing nothing and was completely avoiding her like she asked. Unless Mary gets a redemption arc so good it is beyond the divine realm itself I do not see how they would end up together.

Game of Thrones

Baldur's gate

This is a novel that has extremely high potential despite the fact that our mc acts as a wingman for Jayden for a majority of the 1st game I feel like we need to understand Edward(Amael/Nyr/MC) was not strong. It was a damn shame that Milleia, Aurora and Maria were not part of Edward's harem but this made sense for the most part in the context of the story. Milleia well she never really loved Edward I mean if she did she would have been upfront with her feelings and outright rejected Alfred and Jayden's advances the author put it best Milleia needed Edward she did not love him in the sense the MC was looking for, Aurora with the backstory we got from the OG 1st game that Nyr played it seemed as though Aurora died fighting to protect her country and Jayden which made sense with her character who holds her home country above others to protect her people, but the situation with Maria Edward better get with Maria ain't no way I am gonna accept her going to Jayden especially when the other Gods are influencing her emotions to force the relationship. Aside from that I don't have much more major gripes about the story except where the hell are the other chapters it says 281 chapters and there are only like 240+ chapters if you count the the illustrations and etc. also where is the Discord link. Please update this novel I really do like this novel. I will update my review when the other chapters have been released.