Rayan_Alzahrani_4430
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Rayan_Alzahrani_44301dCommentedThis is a bit of criticism hope it’s okay if not ignore it i think the chapters are too short and what the mc is doing always takes long so it takes a couple of chapters like learning a move took a couple of chapters a battle with a random trainer shouldn’t take more then a chapter you should focus on either making the chapters longer or covering more then one simple thing and muti task rather then spend the whole chapter on doing one thing
Ch 13 Chapter 12- Rayan_Alzahrani_44306dCommentedCh 8 Chapter 7
- Rayan_Alzahrani_44306dCommentedCh 8 Chapter 7
- Rayan_Alzahrani_44306dCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3
- Rayan_Alzahrani_44309dCommented
I cant wait give me a spoiler or a hint please
'Just you wait…' - Rayan_Alzahrani_443011dCommentedCh 5 I Choose You! [5]
- Rayan_Alzahrani_443011dCommented
Wow wait what’s bariar?
He currently knows [Growl], [Tackle], [Mud-Slap] and [Water Gun]. With his egg moves being [Refresh], [Mirror Coat] and [Barrier]." - Rayan_Alzahrani_443012dCommented
Also has a radar
"This is Mudkip the water-type Pokemon. With its sensitive fin on its head, it can predict the weather. Another good choice for adventuring out. Being able to swim you out of trouble while walking on land too, is very versatile. This little one is also the serious type as well but takes instructions literally." - Rayan_Alzahrani_443013dCommented"Heracross, please teach me in the future! Also, Tailow, you need to get along well with Heracross!"
- Rayan_Alzahrani_443014dReplied to ZombieSirGatoREAD
I dunno why but i laughed so hard
In the world of Pokémon, a young man was lying on a strange beach. - Rayan_Alzahrani_443015dCommented
He have Rock slide tm use it
We both send out our first Pokémon, with me sending out Piloswine and he appears stomping the ground in excitement. At the same time, Koga sent out a Golbat that screeched a battlecry after being sent out. It made me consider why a Pokémon of a 'ninja' would be loud like that. Shaking my confusion and second-hand embarrassment for Koga, I focus on the battle to come. - Rayan_Alzahrani_443016dCommented
Bro cheated not cool
Seeing this I used my Psychic abilities to form a protective shield around Swinub not wanting him to be heavily injured even if it meant I get disqualified. Though I doubt they will know it was me who used the move 'Protect' when I could just say Swinub used it instinctively. For a tense few minutes, we can not see anything as the whole arena is covered in heavy smoke, dust, and dirt everywhere. - Rayan_Alzahrani_443016dCommented
Honestly that wasn’t that impressive
"This… This is AMAZING!! You are a prodigy kid! You and your Growlithe are amazing! It has been years since someone has pushed me to this limit with only one Pokémon!" Flint says with a newfound excitement and respect in his eyes. - Rayan_Alzahrani_443016dCommented'Crap. If I back out now, the League will probably suspend me,' the man knew that he couldn't afford to have something like this go on his record. Reluctantly, he sent over the money to Cynthia and Xander, giving each of them 500k.
- Rayan_Alzahrani_443017dReplied to nightwolf2007
It’s sinnoh it’s cold
So after picking out several pairs of black and dark grey hiking pants, he made his way over to shirts to get a few basic grey shirts with different types of symbols on them. He also added a set of Hisuian Dark Slate snow pants and a jacket for when they were in the colder areas of Sinnoh. - Rayan_Alzahrani_443017dCommented
Is there a picture of him?
A boy with black hair was standing next to a blonde girl. The former wore all-white athletic gear while the girl was wearing a black dress with matching accessories such as a black and white hairpiece. - Rayan_Alzahrani_443017dReplied to Dylan_Miller_7038
Where did you read it?
In front of Xander was a bipedal, blue, reptilian Pokemon vaguely resembling a dinosaur. It possessed a large, round snout, triangular eyes, yellow, circular ears similar to reptiles, and a yellow lower jaw with two teeth protruding upwards. Three thick, gray ridges covered the top of its head and continued downwards to cover its neck as well. There was a triangular patch of yellow on its underside. It had stubby, digitless arms and short legs with two toes on each foot. - Rayan_Alzahrani_443017dCommented
How do you pronounce his name zander?
"Grandma is sorry. I need to go check this out. Cynthia, watch over Xander. Xander, you do the same for Cynthia. You two need to watch each other's backs while I'm not watching over you. Your parents are good-for-nothings so you shouldn't rely on them."