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avramelo48minCommentedI would like Hinata to somehow find out a little bit about his past life, specifically about his imprisonment, maybe. I think this will fit in well when Naruto wants to develop Hinata's eyes. Of course, these are all just my wishes, and if you have a ready-made plot, then support it, this is all going great and I like the story.
Ch 14 NindĹ 0014: Exploiting Exploits- avramelo1hCommentedCh 9 Chapter 9: Seal the Economic Fate.
- avramelo1dCommentedCh 84 Chapter 84 Cold Blood
- avramelo1dCommentedYes, if he separated his finger from his hand, he could transform that finger into a crow, which was the DNA he had recorded inside his system.Â
- avramelo2dCommentedCh 82 Chapter 82 Feelings
- avramelo2dCommentedLuke looked surprised, "w-what?"
- avramelo2dCommented"This is my proof that you will always be someone I'll protect, I want you to keep my headband then, you are a kunoichi of the Leaf Village and being a jinchuuriki or not, I will always be by your side and won't let anyone hurt you." Minato spoke with determination.
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HEHEHE
She could see that her grandfather's cells were used in making the arm, and before Hiruzen could stop her, Tsunade tore off the arm from Danzo's hand. - avramelo3dCommented
I was expecting this scene
Katsuyu split into countless bodies and they all rushed at Kazutora. Tsunade had already noticed that Kazutora was only defending against the attacks, and she understood that it was his instincts that were fighting, not him. - avramelo4dCommented
I thought for a moment that she was talking to herself in the style of a young master)))
"She's literally a goddess who hates men; it's like her thing. This tree has a better chance to be with Lucian," Thalia joked, tapping the tree she was leaning on. - avramelo5dCommentedCh 10 NindĹ 0010: Noticing a Discrepancy
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1. Danmachi. - avramelo10dCommented
I'm currently reading two fanfictions at the same time. Yours and one about Naruto. And just now I caught such a hard brain lag
"Well the Naruto team has 2 teams of 6 professionals each and they are working in rotations so that they can have a few days of break and relaxation." - avramelo12dCommented
Your story is very good. Don't listen to these people and their unfounded criticism. It was immediately clear that John would try to improve relations with Dorn, but not with the Martels (almost). And I also agree about the fact that John is still an Outsider, but I feel that he will soon correct this. And Iâm looking forward to Niraâs future plot and she is more developed in character, etc. I never doubted you and your writing, never.
Ch 84 Chapter 84 - Artican Trade in Westeros 11 (Dorne 09). - avramelo25dCommented
In the end, only Tsunade remained. heh
"I might not look like it but I have lots of experience with raising children, other than Tsunade of course." - avramelo27dCommentedCh 109 107. The Aftermath, The Regret, The Promise & A Bone Chilling Performance and A New Year.
- avramelo1mthCommentedCh 83 Chapter 83: Legacy of the Gryphon - A Witcher's Fate