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First off all I would like to thank you for this book I came here after reading star wars fic and both are great plzz do t drop either of these books and keep it up man. Also I haven't watched a single episode of db or dbz but I i understoood almost everything. It has been a week since I read something so good. Also there is one pointer I would like to give the thing about time diversion that you wrote in chapter 17 I think you pointed it now by giving him a chance to grow and only for them to find about it years later accidentally as if he also has protagonists halo of anime where he attracts trouble only when he is able to win. Thanks đ
Good work there men but please why are you repeating the exact scene which was shown in series and there is also the loophole that he can't confess, now he can just say he was controlled as suspected and handle everything from there onward which would also change scenes of ahead chapters same as series Thank you and hope you will listen to my banter
Bro did you dropped it or will u pick it up
It is nice novel better than previous ones for me. I like world background the most here and his superpower which gives makes him too versatile. I just don't like his choice when he choosed superpower when it upgraded to rank B. You made his character look like he would only care for himself and his loved ones and there is no problem in that but why not grow you own strength first like you could have chosen the power to increase strength by 50 times or that one which says instant death when someone is sent to void. I know he doesn't have immediate danger but he should be prepare for any circumstances, rather you chose a power to use like transporting person from one universe to other. Was there any need for that. You could have just focused on your strength first and foremost, then you can do all that family meet up and whatnot. If you have anything regarding this problem then please reply or if you will use those powers in higher rank.
Hey man thanks for the book till now, I loved it but can you please tell me the reason for neglecting his way of growing fan value that if on a single planet he can get fame value of billions then why can't he spread his work all over universe and multiverse where his fan value count even be counted in quintillions or octillian. But you tells that after spreading his work all over universe it is barely 100 billion after years I think you also just wasting his points like a fan boy on useless character not stacking them and upgrading system or buying powers of more powerful character. There are so many op characters in manga and novels. You shows how mc is stressed and want to live a peaceful life but you shows his character of neglecting these simple points that the story have huge plot holes. I just felt he was intelligent and all but deliberately acting as if he was in stress and bringing minions after minions. I have too many problems and points that the chance of making overpowered to many of characters of his teams of avengers but you instead waste them on small fries on multiverse level Thanks for the book I was just frustrated đ đĄ of seeing these things happening all over and over again, hope you don't misunderstand me
wo ,I am jealous