Review Detail of YoursFellowDaoist in Krypton Reborn: Dragon of the Sun

First off all I would like to thank you for this book I came here after reading star wars fic and both are great plzz do t drop either of these books and keep it up man. Also I haven't watched a single episode of db or dbz but I i understoood almost everything. It has been a week since I read something so good. Also there is one pointer I would like to give the thing about time diversion that you wrote in chapter 17 I think you pointed it now by giving him a chance to grow and only for them to find about it years later accidentally as if he also has protagonists halo of anime where he attracts trouble only when he is able to win. Thanks 😊