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First off, the book is really easy to read, I've only read a few chapters, but so far, there aren't any grammatical errors, which just shows how much work the author is putting in. My only little suggestion is if there were more details about the main character and everything surrounding her. Other than that, good job author.
You'll find out soon enough
The book's new, but it's already got a lot of potential, and the unique first chapter really caught my attention. Keep going author, we need more.
I think it would be better if you made it stand out a bit
Although i don't usually read books like this, I've suddenly become partial to this. The writing style is nice, and i love how much personality the MC has, the storyline's very unique and that's what makes it stand out. Overall very good read.
Poor Yamato
This is an early review, but overall, i think the novel's pretty good, you can tell the author has put in a lot of work into this to make it stand out, and it certainly does. The writing style is light hearted and really easy to read, so i think with just a bit of editing, this could become much better.
I've just started this book, but I already really like it. The author's style of writing is simple and easy to understand and I haven't read such a nice book written in the Main character's POV in such a long time. There are also little funny scenes and i think it really adds a little something to the book. I think if the chapters were a little shorter it would be much better, but still, really nice job.
Nice first chapter