was reading G.O.A.T system and I thought well football novels will be good but this is just a** like man who gets a system and is just being half assed with it. The system should have moved on in my opinion, you better up ur game noob or stop writing

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currently at ch 496 and now he is exposed. Well I was already expecting it but not this soon when he isn't yet even a tier3 lord. I am slightly disappointed that when you have that kind of power and you know the problems it can bring you should not have so high profile about showing off talents maybe 3 would have been better but when u start using 5-6 in spars not even life and death battlefield, it just shows how careless one can be. HideousGrain while your works may be slow paced the story is really good just lessen the honest boy moments a little, am sure a little dishonesty, domineering and cold attitude would fit just right. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

i love the book awesome story just think that the story goes a little slow. I mean there already introduced the 7th rank god and Lucifer and yet this nigga hasn't reached the 5th rank when they found him and now they are all keeping watch of him. keep up the good work

do him as an npc come out of the game to save earth bcos I don't understand

why didn't he kill his brother and take the bloodline. haahh it makes me frustrated I wanted him to end it there

very good novel but no information. Author should inform us how to upgrade territory, essential resources needed and include a different thing other than summoning scrolls all the time from the monster corpse. is there a way to include the all mighty system interface that shows us information on the territory like space, upgrade conditions, and the amount of subordinates he has. Anyway am still reading the novel bcos it's hideous grain work and av read 4 of ur works already so keep up the good work . Thanks and peace ✌️

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The feelings in this novel is too much, its been so long now and thus guy power hasn't increased and yet the author still focuses on explaining how he and his wifey feel for each other. dude we know they love each other get on with the novel and stop coming back to the gummy feelings and at the end I still like the novel but pls tone down on this kindness and feelings stuff a little. Thank you

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