Fausto_Neto_4680
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1984
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I also liked the story. But these very absurd moments really leave a bad taste in the mouth. Of those you mentioned, what bothers me a little is the MacBook thing, and now this Leonard training thing. Not only OG Leonard, but any normal person were forced to do this, with a 99% chance they would report the MC to the authorities because he was completely crazy. If this happened at the end of their training arc, it would be more acceptable.
The chapter is a bit boring. I haven't posted my fanfictions, but I've already tested formatting my stories with chap gpt. And a big problem is that if you're not careful with what you ask for, it ends up leaving things very melodic, poetic and dramatic. It looks very unnatural for a fanfiction.
This is an AU I know, but the spirits that live in Bankai are nothing more than a part of the soul of the shinigami. That's why when it breaks it can't recover. So Ichigo's Hollow is nothing more than a part of him, a part that he didn't like and repressed and that's why the Hollow like to controll him.
500k annually is not much, I think you have no idea how much the pharmaceutical industry is a source of money. And they didn't sign a contract? in fact they are not even old enough to sign a contract. Norman wouldn't be stupid enough to throw them away, but he could do several things to control them.