hello author, I want to say the story is shit, poorly implemented, there are a hell of a lot of mistakes, I haven’t read many chapters, but this was enough for me to understand that you don’t understand the characters, so I’ll leave this story, I was hoping for a good balanced story, but it turned out to be bullshit, so good luck to you and further self-development.

what you did is pathetic, but to each his own, the story hasn’t even really begun and you demand money, either you’re poor then I’m not saying anything, or you’re greedy then it’s pathetic, pay for every new chapter, a low act, but everything’s fine.

author, I’m now on chapter 141, if the main character doesn’t look at least a little like a man and will continue to be a rag, I’ll read it up to 200 chapters and during this time the main character won’t grow balls, then I’ll drop this story, the main character is too pathetic , and he has no self-esteem and this is incredibly infuriating.

author, I’m already infuriated by Shizuka’s character, don’t make the main character her dog who accepts everything she does, where is the main character’s self-esteem, don’t make him so pitiful.

Bro, your story is very good, there are some flaws, but these are the little things in life, I am very happy with your story so continue. (it is a translation)

Bro, your story is very good, continue it and don't get discouraged.

hello, author, your story is interesting, but I’m dissatisfied with the fact that you made the main character not courageous, but some kind of person with a weak will and one might even say stupid, and I don’t like this, so I’m dissatisfied with this.

Bro, your story is very good, I liked it, so I and many current and future readers ask you not to abandon it, and thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a wonderful story, thank you.

Bro, your story is very good, I liked it, so I and many current and future readers ask you not to abandon it, and thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a wonderful story, thank you.

Finally, finally, at least someone writes about Fate and DC, I’m really grateful to you for writing what I really wanted to read, Fate is my favorite universe and along with it I really like the DC universe, because for its diversity and once again I am grateful to you for uniting them.

Athena, Hera, Hecate.

he could also turn his sickle into a small needle and throw it at the enemy, and then when the needle hit the enemy and turn into a sickle bomb, remember Alter Emiya so he could shoot bullets and use the concept of his dimension on us when the bullet hit the enemy, then inside him, then inside him, his UBW expanded and the enemy died in a very cruel way, he was turned into minced meat from the inside.

not all dragons, Grindel, Orochi, Apophis and three others in my opinion

The British were also part Celts, so he still had to use Excalibur, Caliburn and the swords of the rest of the knights of the round table

Azazazel has not 10 but 12 wings

awesome, just crazy, and I'm the first

no, this is not necessary, traveling to other worlds, then the story will lose its identity, you need to finish DXD to the end and finish this story, nothing extra is needed

The author of why did you make Karna so sentimental, he was more apothetic.

why not Athena?Athena is more suited to him given Karn's true nature.

Athena