Elona_Alone
Holla. Nothing much to say. I write romance novel mixed with comedy. Kindly check it out.... wink
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Dear . This is the mistakes you made . "I love you Jack" instead of "I love you Jack." Try reading that chapter again to understand what I'm saying
It seemed you always forget to put full before the quotation ending
Having a suspense at the end of each chapters is what I'm currently feeling . Unlike most novels you can easily guess how it's going to end just by reading the first chapter but this is different . I'm not sugarcoating this novel, but explaining how I felt . The characters development was wonderful, the plot twist is more than excellent. The only error I saw in this novel is that sometimes the author forget to put a quotation after the sentence of a person ended . Also the author sometimes use first person point of view in place of third person pov . Other than that this is a must read, and I didn't even think twice before adding this book to library . If you want a novel that would keep you to the hook, then this is it . Beside I don't praise novels but this novel have a great potential and if the author edit her errors this is in her book then it would be super cool đđ
I must admit, this is getting more interesting . Definitely adding it to my Library đ
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Aww đ„ș
He said
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No quotation mark.
jeez
you forgot to put this (") at the end of this statement
woah đ he really is terrified
lol đ
Mixed feelings đ„Č
The novel was nice and it have an interesting pace but I think the writer need to do some editing. Paragraphs are too long making it hard to follow. The exclamation marks, apostrophe, full stop and some other things aren't in place. I advice that the writer use quillbot, Grammerly or perhaps a paraphrasing app on app store or playstore. It would help in the editing of the book since it needs a lot of editing. I see potential but I believe the writer can do more.
Sometimes fairytales are realđ
Too much exclamation mark
Yup. most friends this days are pest and it's becoming common in the world đđ