Where you been

Welcome back and thank for the chapter

While not a 5 star is still very good. The stat was shakey with the “ntr” he just lost his girl she wasn’t taken he left her since she was a Thot, it also led to good character development from bother the mc and the chick. The worst part is the later chapters how something’s are listed as events instead of explained. I’m only commenting since I seen the author mock the ratings and after reading it these ratings aren’t fair at all

Ya no it’s confirmed that top level powerhouses in one piece are stronger than the top in naruto that including naruto himself. 5% of a man who could split island in one move is special jonin atleast.

The story is not accurate to cannon or to the original characters, starting chapter is Sakura being antisocial and more distant for some apparent reason. That wouldn’t happen sasuke leaving didn’t change her if anything it made her more dependent on her remaining friends and focus more of training. The second chapter is sasuke being a scared bitch and blinding himself. I can guess the rest of the story from this short intro, he will go to Sakura to treat him and fall in love ect. The biggest training sasuke had was in his eyes, his genjutsu his movements based of the eyes ie his shurikin jutsu and taijutsu and progressing the eyes to the third tomoe. His development of the lightning jutsu was secondary to that, so basicly the story is now fucked, he’s weaker than cannon and can’t possible get to the point needed to fight the upcoming war. So it’s a a deadlock romance fic with the worst character Sakura

It says 10 is average in every stat not minimum

Ya as I read further I agree but that’s where the authors taking it so ya

There is so much wrong with this fic, I hate the bots that spam high reviews for trash like this. The grammer is horrible, but the real kicker is the character development and plot. Basic abandoned mc treated like shit but like a lost puppy obeys his master ie the village still, no revenge nothing. The is random emotional events out of nowhere to build character but they’re horrible and misplaced. Frankly a child could’ve written a better fic, if the author isn’t one then go back to school dawg. Horrible system/ power leveling. Skipped two years of training at the begining of the story so no power development either. My god this story is fucking horrible

Ya and not all of them were strong look at zetsu he was a s rank solely for his spying abilities

I can plank for 8 minutes even the fittest marines I know only got 20 minutes except that monster who has hours 40 min for a untrained kid he’ll nah

If you make a oc to replace rudeus then don’t follow the story word for word like the cannon I’ve seen to many story’s where it’s cannon but under another name the only difference being the oc is more of a pervert than the legendary per himself

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Rank of rebel doesn’t represent strength more so risk so these are probably elite jonin or sum that knows a secret or two jonin weren’t weak

It’s a really good story so far the only thing that sucks is the inconsistency on the updates.

? Rudy should be born right now, the author states he figured out where he was based of the mention of Roxy who only came to the village when Rudy needed at teacher. Is the author stupid

Look this story is good, not the best grammer and clunky but it’s good. There is only one nigga saying negative shit don’t let it detour you from trying the fic

I’m just saying princess amedala is around

Even in Star Wars they didn’t explore or find every planet or star maps of old were simply lost. There could also be law in interfering with barbaric planets. In the mcu case it’s a lot bigger than shown and light travel is still slow so travel to known planets don’t exlore much I believe. Star Wars travel was beyond light speed so travel makes since but mcu is kinda grey area