Love her too but she’s young at this point, she’s the same age as jack. Being 12 right now
I mean I could go into detail as to why it’s bad but it would waste time I didn’t want to spend at the time. I’ll name a few thing off the top of my head here. The dialogue is very basic with no meaning behind it, the mc uses an op ability very badly, mc is one dimensional, the whole family situation is cringy and so is every interaction with the upper family. The relationship with the girl is also out of nowhere to. So to sum up everything, no buildup and horribly put together.
I don’t want to explain all the reasons it’s bad. Have a look and you’ll understand. It’s very cliche, basic, and extremely cringy.
The more you learn
Indeed, they would have been captured, starved, killed, lost, or just plain bored without him. He carried the team
Oh ya for sure, but sokka carried hard. Toph was the occasional humor but sokka was a day one
Sokka really doesn’t get enough credit, he was the only funny one.
Nah not really, slow update maybe but I’m enjoying the pace. Fanfics are usually speedy but a novel type is meant to be slower.
Thanks for the chapter, I enjoyed likes pov, it offers a refreshing change and shows his downward spiral that the novel Luke had reached. David’s pov was also alright.