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Hadi_Mousa

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2022-05-22 JoinedSweden
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    Hadi_Mousa1yr
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    so like, does this mean that they traveled to the dbz universe or sometime else? I am confusion

    The only sign that time wasn't stopped was the lightning generated by the energy generator seen through the transparent window. I ignored all of this and just grabbed Raven and Kara at their collars and shot into the wormhole, while leaving behind a clone.
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    Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
    Anime & Comics · Draugzel
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    Hadi_Mousa1yr
    Commented

    Go to horny-jail you degenerates

    You thought that winks were hinting at something sexual didn't you? You degenerate pervert! *Spite* we need a no-horny wall right here to stop these degenerates! BONKERS!!!!! ASSEMBLE!!!!!!!
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    The Flash: What If [Completed]
    TV · Night132
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    Hadi_Mousa1yr
    Commented

    does he have a schedule for when he uploads the chapters for people who don't pay for Patreon, if so, can someone reply with the days?

    Ch 113 The Chunin Exams - 39
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    Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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    Hadi_Mousa1yr
    Commented

    is it me or is him not using commas ( , ) just really confusing?

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    DcMcu: kaiju system
    Sci-fi · wiz161
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    Hadi_Mousa1yr
    Posted

    i really enjoyed reading this, i am at chapter 41 at this point (latest chapter). The mc's power is actually relative to how much he has actually trained, and his "gang" are also relatively powerful. Writing quality - I barely ever see any spelling error, grammar is on point, and he uses the english language very good just in general updates - very good, it's a schedule that he follows and uploads on those days, there has been unfortunately times where he thinks he uploads it but hasn't but he usually fixes that quickly story development - the story starts a few years before the start of the series, and begins with the mc waking up in one of the air tempels , the story goes on with him meeting the beifong family, wan shi tong etc. and now at chapter 41 we have come to the start of the series. character design - author is pretty good at explaining how people look, he has his own oc (actually his whole gang is made up of oc's) and he explains how they look often even going the extra mile of explaining what they wear. world background - this is ok, because unfortunately the we aren't really shown a lot of the world but i think i can overlook this because most people have seen atla and can imagine for themselves. 4/5. this is actally one of the best fanfics i've read on this site, mc isn't too powerful but isn't either too weak, he has a really good character development, and it's not just him, it's other people too, and i can only imagine how much toph will have changed once we see her again

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    Madara in the Avatar World
    Anime & Comics · KojiSan
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