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so like, does this mean that they traveled to the dbz universe or sometime else? I am confusion
Go to horny-jail you degenerates
is it me or is him not using commas ( , ) just really confusing?
i really enjoyed reading this, i am at chapter 41 at this point (latest chapter). The mc's power is actually relative to how much he has actually trained, and his "gang" are also relatively powerful. Writing quality - I barely ever see any spelling error, grammar is on point, and he uses the english language very good just in general updates - very good, it's a schedule that he follows and uploads on those days, there has been unfortunately times where he thinks he uploads it but hasn't but he usually fixes that quickly story development - the story starts a few years before the start of the series, and begins with the mc waking up in one of the air tempels , the story goes on with him meeting the beifong family, wan shi tong etc. and now at chapter 41 we have come to the start of the series. character design - author is pretty good at explaining how people look, he has his own oc (actually his whole gang is made up of oc's) and he explains how they look often even going the extra mile of explaining what they wear. world background - this is ok, because unfortunately the we aren't really shown a lot of the world but i think i can overlook this because most people have seen atla and can imagine for themselves. 4/5. this is actally one of the best fanfics i've read on this site, mc isn't too powerful but isn't either too weak, he has a really good character development, and it's not just him, it's other people too, and i can only imagine how much toph will have changed once we see her again