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DarkFight3r

DarkFight3r

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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Commented

    I never understood why they have to stay awake?? What is the reason??

    [I know it hurts, especially with a mortal body like this, Master. But you must keep holding on, lest you lose consciousness, or everything will be in vain.]
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    Cultivator With Modern AI
    Eastern · JosieGan
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Replied to DarkFight3r

    I just read that the authour said he was going to fix the grammar 8 months ago but hasnt done so. I mean take your creation serious!!

    altalt
    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Replied to DarkFight3r

    Also it would be great if the author went back and fixed at least all the blatant grammar mistake. It would give future readers a greater experience.

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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Posted

    Decent story but its very obvious that the author is a complete novice. I mean the grammar is absolutely horrid!! Sentence structure all over the place! Constant POV switches. I can only hope he gets better the more he writes.

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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Commented

    weeks?? author has no sense of time

    "It is at the Philippine Exchange Tower in BGC. According to my research, it seems that he had leased office space there for SolaraTech," Carla responded, flipping through her notes to confirm the details. "The lease started a few weeks ago, and from what I've gathered, the office is quite sizable. It seems that Mr. Reyes has a lot of startup capital thanks to its investors."
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Commented

    he*

    That's right…Alexander Tan was the real father of Richard Reyes. Of course, there is history. He remembered he left Myra due to them having one night stand in the club they met, and he didn't seriously consider the consequences of that night. Because Myra was just another woman she interacted with. Of course before leaving, he had learned of his son's name, and he couldn't be mistaken. It was Michael Reyes.
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Posted

    It was good at first but man does this get draged out. I mean 70 chapters in and still he hasnt produced anything. And why does he even need to produce stuff if he could just sit back and let his super advanced Ai do stock trading for him?

    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Commented

    what about the reward? the random gift box or whatever it was?

    Ch 73 Next Mission
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    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Commented

    pointless chapter

    Ch 72 New Mission: Hire People!
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    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Commented

    it said all were level 2 no?

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Replied to Josh_Yates

    CEO can also often be not an owner only a professional boss.

    "Exactly," Catherine affirmed. "And remember, the more valuable your company becomes, the more valuable your remaining equity is. So, even if you own a smaller percentage, it can be worth much more in the long run."
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r1mth
    Commented

    Why not just license the technology to big corporations and just get easy royalties?

    Ch 14 Virtual World
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    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r2mth
    Replied to Wulfie

    We learned this to in Medschool. Its because you have to know how cells work and these kind of stuff but if you dont go into research you forget it really fast lol.

    They needed to know about ions, protons and so on.
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    I'm the King Of Technology
    Fantasy · lumydee
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r2mth
    Posted

    What an interesting Idea but it is ruined by absolute horrendous grammar. Also the further into the story you get, the more its draged out.

    altalt
    Factory Inc.
    Sci-fi · Gravedagger
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r2mth
    Posted

    I came for the main character but we get like 2 chapters of him and them sooo many background chapters. I dont care what happened to the dude before he died. For the amount of free chapters, theres very little about the main guy. Disappointed!!

    altalt
    Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!
    Eastern · Odayaka
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r2mth
    Commented
    Ch 5 Chapter 5: The Selection Begins!
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    Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!
    Eastern · Odayaka
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r3mth
    Posted

    I thought its going to be a good story, but man am I disappointed! Nothing happens in the first 15 chapters only some minor smut with horrible dialogue. Its as if no original thought went into the story. And dont come with read further it gets better crap, the most important thing is to make the first chapters good to capture the reader.

    altalt
    Eternal Temptation: Awakening Sinful Desires
    Eastern · Slow_down
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r3mth
    Posted

    The story is decent, but I dont like multiple MCs. Also quite a lot spelling mistakes. I‘ll continue reading but skipp the boring second main character (the „good guy“)

    altalt
    Villain MMORPG: Almighty Devil Emperor and His Seven Demonic Wives
    Games · UnholyGod
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r4mth
    Commented
    He said his goodbyes to both of them and left their peaceful courtyard which was now covered in autumn leaves, as a new determination filled the hearts of two beauties.
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    Dual Cultivation God Returns
    Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
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  • DarkFight3r
    DarkFight3r4mth
    Commented
    Wu Long went to the side and sat on one of the sofas. He watched her with a look no one could see through and guess emotions he was feeling or thoughts that he had. He watched as she walked towards the bathroom, and looked as she took off her tights and underwear that were now completely drenched. As she cleaned herself with a warm wet tower, and wore new underwear and tights, he took off his shoes, sat in a lotus position and started meditating. A few moments later, the Spiritual Qi in the room and Yin Qi that was released into the air started gathering towards him, as he cultivated.
    altalt
    Dual Cultivation God Returns
    Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
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