Review Detail of DarkFight3r in Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Item: Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
Rating: 2.8

Review detail

DarkFight3rLv32mthDarkFight3r

Decent story but its very obvious that the author is a complete novice. I mean the grammar is absolutely horrid!! Sentence structure all over the place! Constant POV switches. I can only hope he gets better the more he writes.

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Agent_047

Liked it!

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DarkFight3rLv3DarkFight3r

Also it would be great if the author went back and fixed at least all the blatant grammar mistake. It would give future readers a greater experience.

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DarkFight3rLv3DarkFight3r

I just read that the authour said he was going to fix the grammar 8 months ago but hasnt done so. I mean take your creation serious!!

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