Great story 👏Especially with how in character your writing is. Also for Franky what fruit are u gonna give him?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🦂😶‍🌫️

Very good story. Specially with those changes, I didn't like the war arch or Boruto. So I kinda want to see how you will write there. Also, I am kinda of seeing a resemblance to Supreme Magus. And you said that you were inspired from there for the breathing technique. Will you also like explain Fuinjutsu that way in SM. like their forgemastary is kinda similar to Fuinjutsu? So yeah I'm really into it right now. I know the pace is slow then the other fanfics, but others are garbage anyway copies from Weaxu shit and op as fuck. I do see some people complaining about him being weak. But man he's 5. What do you expect him to do? Awaken the rinagan. Even Itachi took many years to perfect his shurikenjutsu and fire style. I have a ton of fanfics here, most of em are pretty bad, so don't listen to them. Fanfiction dot net has quite few guddies, and yours is kinda similar. Oh you can also read Ghost of Uchiha it's kind a good story about Madara. And also there's also a Naruto SI story here in WebNovel that's also good. I don't remember it's name, Invocatus maybe. Don't remember. Anyway take it slow, and release more chapters. Just don't drop it.