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Yeah I can see you have a good story going, and it’s amazing to see this level of quality out of what appears to be your first work, it’s just sad to see that the readers have such a say in how you progress, I’ll probably come back to this in the future or if you ever do a second novel. Keep up the good work you definitely have serious skill at writing and character development.
Absolutely excellent story, character building and incredible fight scenes, but felt that a lot of character building was wasted with Xiao Li, I understand that as an author you need to keep reader attention so you have to succumb to reader pressure but still disappointing to see several chapters of character building wasted, I personally won’t be continuing but would very much like to say that you did incredible work as an author and hope the story continues strong.
Leave it up to Author, trust them to make best choice for the plot.
Would cause shifts in the gravitational force and would screw up their orbit considerably, which would have ripple affects to all the other planets and possibly cause some planets to leave their orbit. The gravitational pull of the planets in our solar system keep each other in orbit in the specific manner it is. Changing the size of one planet suddenly to 6 times its size would decrease the distance between itself and other planets which would cause it to have a stronger affect on those two planets pushing them out of orbit. I don’t know the science specifically but fair to say unless some magic says fuck you to orbital shift, earth is quite fucked.
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They’re sinful beings, they probably don’t see age as a big deal in relationships, and he’s only biologically 13, he doesn’t look anywhere near that age. Also he’s mentally quite a bit older as well.
Haha, love the insanity.
I immediately pictured the sink mirror combo, it’s in like every house nowadays.
Instantly thought of mobius chair, would be awesome for him to create his own version of it.
Great chapter, never watched or read jujutsu kaisen but absolutely love this well done story.