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so the chapter was good I would live for it to be a little long in the chapters in the future please make the fight scenes longer and more detailed more sword play as well he is a master martial artist emphasize that. The overall writing was no good no grammatical mistakes. I just hope for longer chapters with better fight scenes 5 stars
hi I really love this fiction just continue to update daily and be consistent please this has the potential to be one of the best one piece fics