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Haizen_6535

Haizen_6535

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2022-05-11 JoinedGlobal
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65351mth
    Commented

    I' happy with this chapter 😃

    Ch 51 Bout
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    Just Another Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · IHaveHidden
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65351mth
    Commented

    The history Is pretty good, but its geting a little boring with the excess of introspección, It would be preferable, at less to me, If you include more about his acctions insted of his thougts.

    Ch 49 Letting go
    altalt
    Just Another Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · IHaveHidden
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65352mth
    Commented

    i vote that Is an answere of the world to de overpoblation

    Anyway it's pointless to say something I would never understand.
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    Multiversal: The Shop
    Anime & Comics · Charlottes
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65352mth
    Commented

    when are you going to uplload a new chapter?

    Ch 27 Chapter 27- Heist
    altalt
    Multiverse Internet Cafe: The Game Maker
    Video Games · LazyTanaka
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65353mth
    Replied to Bob80085

    I'm in, when Is the hunt.

    Ch 34 Chapter 29: islands
    altalt
    I am the son of Simon Petrikov (An adventure time fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Dagon_vcg
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65353mth
    Replied to Haizen_6535

    motto*

    - Unknown
    altalt
    DC: Phantom Thief Kid
    Anime & Comics · Sothisq
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65353mth
    Commented

    thet' the moto of mu school XD

    - Unknown
    altalt
    DC: Phantom Thief Kid
    Anime & Comics · Sothisq
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65354mth
    Commented

    I'm a bit worried about your sicknes. (⁠ㆁ⁠ω⁠ㆁ⁠)

    Ch 5 Ch. 5 - Wise words of a master
    altalt
    Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer
    Movies · SlimeSage
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65354mth
    Commented

    Por como lo hás redactado, supongo que este mundo no es tan común como aparenta o de alguna forma interactuará con otro, si no es el caso, disculpame pero no le vería el caso a entregar tales recompensas.

    Ch 2 The legendary marrow cleansing
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    Game Maker: I Can Make Portals to Alternative Realities
    Games · DaoistAutumn_rain
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65354mth
    Commented

    un inicio humilde y bien redactando, aunque es un poco acelerado en cuanto a los acontecimientos, en general, es un inicio decente, seguiré tu historia para ver por dónde puedes llevarlo. ☺️

    Ch 1 System?
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    Game Maker: I Can Make Portals to Alternative Realities
    Games · DaoistAutumn_rain
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  • Haizen_6535
    Haizen_65355mth
    Posted

    muy buena historia, de las mejores que he leído.

    altalt
    Si, bueno... este no es un buen mundo
    Anime & Comics · Culture_Lover
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