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NoirRav3n16dCommentedempyrean boar*
This was what resulted in his state of being more Empyrean Tusk than an Empyrean Tusk towards the end of Sumatra Chronicles. It was why no matter how much he wanted to stay sane, Brangara became maddened with rage the moment he spotted an Empyrean Tusk.- NoirRav3n29dReplied to lifesketcher
very true. got a little ahead of myself there. still cant wait to see what he'll grow into.
Perhaps not everyone else saw it like that, but he knew for a fact that if he ever gained power he wouldn't hesitate to use it to benefit his family. So, perhaps to avoid being hypocritical, he was not averse to the concept of great families. Though, he did find a few more than distasteful. The names Rodney and Dom came to mind. - NoirRav3n29dReplied to Bad_Bishop
awesome 👌 the story is very engaging and the power system is awesome. its been a little slower these last couple chapters but no complaints otherwise. s
"Urghh, what am I forgetting." - NoirRav3n30dCommented
maybe that their hidden card is a E RANK?!
"Urghh, what am I forgetting." - NoirRav3n1mthCommented
alley*
With quick steps, Kruxe followed after the woman, till he was steps behind her, and then when he was sure there were a few buildings between the woman and the inn and then an ally up ahead, he made his move. - NoirRav3n1mthCommented
looks like kruxe is shaping up into a real pirate now
Intensifying his pace, Kruxe moved right behind the woman and then just as she was passing by the entrance into an ally, he smashed his body into hers, his right hand wrapping around both her arms and waist while his left went over her mouth and pulled her away. - NoirRav3n1mthCommented
Dude thats gonna end up killing them
"All right, rather than struggle and attack now and run the risk of me missing one of them, I'll wait for the right opportunity. Remember, Kruxe, be careful not to kill them, just the legs and arms." - NoirRav3n1mthCommented
Privilege makes you blind 🥱
"God, what is happening to me? How can I be a victim of misfortunes and tragedies so consecutively? I mean, how can my luck be so bad?" Kruxe cried within before passing out. - NoirRav3n1mthCommented"Tchh, just so you know, I'm very aware that you could have stopped him from jumping overboard if you wished."
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this got HP written all over it. 🙂↕️
"He's my youngest brother, Leon Astrahart." Alec proclaimed, stepping forward and placing his hand on her shoulder, "It'll be okay, Headmistress Agatha; the Head Boy position has been vacant for years!" - NoirRav3n1mthCommented
Ew. Commander Cody, as a clone, I'd thought you'd know better than to pull something like this! 😤
"…Listen, Milord." Cody sighed, closing his eyes as he shook his head, "Parthrak are overwhelmingly inferior to humans, so he can't possibly have any talent." - NoirRav3n1mthCommented"…So that's how it is…" Commander Cody sighed, "I understand your point, but we can't help him. I've never heard of a Parthrak working as a servant before. You should get rid of him quickly."
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Talons okay! 🥺 Don't you ever scare me like that again author! 🤧
Talon didn't look like a mad bird, or some twisted, devilish, corrupted animal. He simply looked like Talon. Tears of gratitude and relief welled in his eyes as he was unable to tear his gaze away from his companion. And Talon had the same response, using a feather to rub gently at the back of the Bearer's neck. - NoirRav3n1mthCommentedTime slowed down, the few Cranebirds left came flying down at him, the Gorgolith was right behind him, ready to clobber him with a strike of its deadly claws. Spheris chased away the tears from his face and his determination steeled as the order left his lips:
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Oh no that sounds like a death flag. please don't let it be a death flag. 🥺
In Spheris's opinion, there was nothing good about the Continent. Nothing apart from the mother he wanted to save from it. But, he understood Linne's plight. The steel cold heart he thought he had was touched, and without knowing it, he made a promise to himself to make sure he led her to the real world. - NoirRav3n1mthCommented
No! 😦 No! "Corrupt" or "taint" seem much more apt. Impurify is a mouthful. Thas just me tho.
A silent breeze danced through him and the gaze he had strengthened, he channeled his Essence into his voice and commanded the Influence: "Impurify." - NoirRav3n1mthCommented
This reminds me of that stadium built in Brazil that bankrupted the already impoverished people just so they could host whtever tournament they were hosting that year.
"It is a glorious sight, is it not?" Bellunder asked. "The Continental Dome." - NoirRav3n1mthCommented"How dare you, faggot!" the marshal growled.
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Get em Talon! 👊
"Spheris!" he heard Nephta yell his name, but he knew she couldn't save him. It was Talon who fearlessly flew to the Gorgolith's eye and perched on it constantly with his beak, upsetting the monstrous beast. The creature roared angrily, but refused to let go. - NoirRav3n1mthCommented
I hope Nero gets the character development he needs to not be this naive about power dynamics. he needs to be disillusioned about many things. cuz if he really thinks these things are just about taking care of family, or that being Kolari means anything, that'll be the most stupid thing ever.
Perhaps not everyone else saw it like that, but he knew for a fact that if he ever gained power he wouldn't hesitate to use it to benefit his family. So, perhaps to avoid being hypocritical, he was not averse to the concept of great families. Though, he did find a few more than distasteful. The names Rodney and Dom came to mind.