WebNovel truly has fallen, this novel is basically porn, with no graphic content!

Obito, the secret chinise-cultivation-protagonist insert…

You know they are all under a genjutsu, right?

I meant that it is similar in concept, and ‘poorly executed’ meant you have ‘unnatural’ dialogue, at least in my opinion. Also, the frequent lack of comas or capital letters breaks any immersion. And, to answer your question; I’ve read until the chapter “chakra”, where I deemed it ‘unreadable’.

The novel is basically a poorly executed ‘Wind Calamity’, with a senju as the MC, borderline unreadable sentences, poor interpunction and spelling, and average grammar. The character is, well, bland, he doesn’t, in my opinion, differ from your average isekai MC. Didn’t read long enough to see any innovative interpretations of the shinobi world, but a ‘canon accurate’ version still deserves 4 stars.

This whole story is basically pointless, there is no actual challenge for the MC, he is so OP the whole world is just useless… The character design is shallow, at best, with no development, no struggle, no tension etc. It just feels like watching a cheater play with actual players, you don’t care, because he will win either way, with 99% of the story being predictable. So, this novel, if you can even call it that, is a giant waste of time, written by an inexperienced writer, who wanted to feel all-powerful, due to real life problems.

They do, it’s just less, it’s ‘cleaner’. Did you mean to post it somewhere else, or what? Because I can’t see your point.

What do you define as African wilderness? The middle of a desert, a rainforest or the top of a mountain?

The problem with highly sophisticated words is their forcefulness. No sane person uses such words, in this amount, in any conversation. If you are writing anything, that isn’t a science paper, the use of these words just proves you don’t know how to write. This book will be read by mostly non-native English speakers (or readers in this case). So, the use of unnecessary adjectives or tier 2 words proves that either an AI wrote this or that the author doesn’t know how to write.

That was sarcastic…

In mathematical expression it rises by 2n, with n being the level.

That’s just how chinise authors write their novels.

That is actually a pretty genius action, if the protagonist stays in the sect he won’t get his ’opportunity’ and the MC will be able to take it for himself.

This is just a copy-paste story based on thousands of the same template. We have a ‘trash’ MC in an academy, a ‘powerful’ young master of sorts. Obviously the people without power are discriminated against and the MC gains a system… The story might as well have been written by an AI, it lacks any originality or innovation. The writing is bland, and, if not for the good-quality English, would deserve a 2 star max.

Well, the one who REMAINED, Loki took his place as the one who remains.

Generally the novel deserves 2 stars, its main problem is predictability( because of the genericity of the world and story). Writing quality: 1 Star. Although the spelling of most words is correct, the grammar is nothing short of atrocious, frequent mistakes in sentence structure and a noticeable lack of some words. Updating stability: 3 Stars. The updates are mostly random in random numbers, however they are relatively stable. Story development: 2 Stars. The story follows the generic ‘class summoned to another (fantasy) world’. It is therefore predictable and offers no mystery or tension whatsoever. Character design: 1 Star. The character is the subversion of a trope gone wrong, this specific genre requires an underdog protagonist because of the way its structured, if the top student with everything is the main character he offers no character development, as he stays as the same ‘top’ character and considering the use of ‘overpowered’ in the synopsis doesn’t experience any change. World background: 2 Stars. The world presented is the generic medieval kingdom, most likely with heavy inspiration from the anime ‘arifureta’. It is known for its simplicity, presenting no opportunities for ‘secret’ plots.

Ninja running is redundant in our world, but in the Naruto world it is much more effective, because it makes you more aerodynamic, so at high speeds you run faster.

It would be more appropriate to say that Loki’s variant is „He who remains” now. As Kang’s variant, who previously „ruled” is dead.

The lernean hydra is supposed to be a multi-headed serpent. Not the creature in Total War: Warhammer. It is supposed to be about human sized. (In terms of height)

It is advised to actually read anything mr. 6 hours and 6550 books… Empty criticism, like yours (here), is useless, it serves no purpose, except maybe discouraging others from reading the novel, which, although not a masterpiece, is substantially better than a Chinese MTL. You should appreciate it, or at least try to justify your opinion. Oh, and try to avoid insulting the author as it is considered rude.