Review Detail of No_One_1398 in Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja
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The novel is basically a poorly executed ‘Wind Calamity’, with a senju as the MC, borderline unreadable sentences, poor interpunction and spelling, and average grammar. The character is, well, bland, he doesn’t, in my opinion, differ from your average isekai MC. Didn’t read long enough to see any innovative interpretations of the shinobi world, but a ‘canon accurate’ version still deserves 4 stars.
Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja
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I meant that it is similar in concept, and ‘poorly executed’ meant you have ‘unnatural’ dialogue, at least in my opinion. Also, the frequent lack of comas or capital letters breaks any immersion. And, to answer your question; I’ve read until the chapter “chakra”, where I deemed it ‘unreadable’.
FirstHokage:Can you please tell me how many chapters you actually read, because as I have already agreed this novel did had some similarities with wind calamity but after chapter 10 it became different, as for now I have written about 120 chapters and I can confidently say that now it doesn't have anything common with wind calamity (also worked on grammar too) I would have loved it if you read it some more😊
Can you please tell me how many chapters you actually read, because as I have already agreed this novel did had some similarities with wind calamity but after chapter 10 it became different, as for now I have written about 120 chapters and I can confidently say that now it doesn't have anything common with wind calamity (also worked on grammar too) I would have loved it if you read it some more😊
I agree when I started writing this novel my skills were not so great, That is the reason initial 10-15 chapters are not so good but now I am trying to improve this, thanks for the review I will keep it in my mind for my future work 😊
No_One_1398:I meant that it is similar in concept, and ‘poorly executed’ meant you have ‘unnatural’ dialogue, at least in my opinion. Also, the frequent lack of comas or capital letters breaks any immersion. And, to answer your question; I’ve read until the chapter “chakra”, where I deemed it ‘unreadable’.