Writing style is great, very detailed, there's really no problem whatsoever, but I do feel like its kind of rushed Dont get me wrong the story is good, but I think it'll be much better to start of with an introduction Its good to summarize something but it can be both good and bad but in tje first chapter the intro takes more focus Keep up it up
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