Now that how to write a real, quote on quote, negative review is out of the way let's get back to how you clearly do not seem to understand what you are reading: SPOILERS: #1 TOAA NEEDED a replacement Oblivion, the MC was the best fit, with the alterations the void made to his soul. #2 The only minor problem(which is actually not minor), that the mc solves are in another universe. Within his universe, everything he does has significance, especially since he is literally given responsibility over the balance of his universe, Skrull genocide, is a mayor thing. The only asgardian he beats up, and for very good reason if you know anything about young Odin, is Odin, (Writing this I realized I could have done a much better job in introducing him, his backstory, and what he has done, to garner the MC's initial disdain, see that is how you are supposed to feedback on a negative review). Aside from Odin, no Asgardian is harmed by the MC, in any case he is helping them. Making fun of Reed, are you a fan of his, because otherwise, you would know that is the least he deserves. Again another one that could have been better introduced and explained, though I do so in the comments. #3 The mentality of a 13 year old..., seriously. So you are telling me, that between being an overbearing dictator, and having childlike wonder the instant you receive nigh infinite power, you would have neither? Well the MC has a little of both, and if not using curse words is why you are saying he has the mentality of a 13 year old, then tell me, what being of great power needs to use curse words to get their point across? Other than weak ones. Half the novel is dialogue, not him praising himself, get it right, though again a normal person would have a power high, anyone who denies that is illogical, and praising himself is a part of that, he is still getting used to it. #4 He is not acting like Giratina or a 13 year old, he is acting like an immature, and inexperienced universal ruler, No normal 13 year old, would genocide a civilization with balance in mind, nor have no regrets, except for some minor inconvenience brought by it either. As he grows, and gains experience he will develop a more appropriate personality, and actions, the story is still going, I only stopped momentarily for other reasons outside of my control. #5 And finally if it was really as bad as you say it was, I can't believe you had to sacrifice yourself reading it to the end, word of advice, if you do not like something, nobody is forcing you to read it, and on top of that leaving such a bad review, at least do it right.

*Exasperated sigh* 1 out of 10 review, a lot whining with no real feedback, or suggestions for improvement. Seriously how hard, can it be to write a real review? Step 1: Recognize something the author did right. Step 2: Point out as many things the author did not do correctly or could improve as you can. Step 3: Provide at least two ways to fix each thing done wrong so the author can actually improve instead of just feeling disappointed with people's reading comprehension. Step 4: Conclusion, if you cannot follow steps 1 through 3 in their entirety, then do not post a review in the first place, all you are doing is wasting everyone's time, and spreading negativity with no room for improvement.

I thought Giratina came out first, but I guess you are not wrong...

SPOILERS: Oh, I get it now, though I decided against making them enemies because in some mythologies, they are fierce and kind protectors, and Odin is an Aesir(Norse war gods) Even after having the well's blessing, he does some really stupid things, so whether with or without the sacrifice he should really have a few people(Frigga, and the Norns) to be his check in moral and logical actions. Also like Lady Death says layer on, I really do not understand why he, as an Aesir, would be the Norse God of Wisdom and Magic, especially since the Vanir(Norse wise gods) already exist, heck his wife Frigga is a Vanir, which is why I am more biased towards Frigga over Odin when it comes to magic, and intellect.

Excuse me, but what?

To be honest, inexperience. As I kept writing, I started separating more and more. Another point is that when writing, I use my computer, and what seems like a short few sentences or moderate paragraph ends up like a massive one on the phone.

I don't know, love is weird, but she may or may not still be with him the next time they are brought up...

No, Captain Marvel will still be female, because this universe is mostly based on the MCU everything else was added onto it, the only part I completely changed from the MCU was the Asgardians being the comic versions for their massive lifespans, and Heimdall being Odin's son which I got from Assassin's Creed lore, the rest even though there WILL BE changes, are still at least somewhat based on the MCU. Of course, that is explicitly for Marvel present characters, as beings that haven't been introduced in the MCU or are from other franchises are fair game, in my opinion. I also have not watched almost any new Marvel movie in the last 5+ years, so the only content from the MCU I will use as reference are the og movies, the rest will come from comics, other franchises, and my own imagination.

If Dargo can rename the strongest material in Marvel after himself "Dargonite" then I can rename the new strongest material "Spectrenite"

She will still exist, but differently...

If he could see it, definitely, but this is their POV. In these moments, he was still dealing with Frigga and Odin.

True, but this is also his selective hearing kicking in, I could have written it better I think, but the fact that their answer is not in quotations and he is simply processing what he thought he heard, should hopefully explain that.😅

To my knowledge, Black Panther was a member, then quit, then joined again for the beyonder events. This roster is from before he quit.

I don't know. However, the way I look at it, Logan's healing factor is not an adaptive physiology, only a Hyper regenerative one. There are points for and against this, but in the end, it is fiction, and I am not well versed in biology to know how the body would react to long exposure to metals within it, under hyper regenerative physiological conditions.

Absolute Personal Mastery Ability

To my knowledge, no. It is just poisoning him to death.

No, this was meant as a joke, TOAA knows what he meant, but in their context he didn't feel like explaining, besides it was not a lie whether in the comics or my novel he is a cosmic plus being.

Isn't the Hanma Bloodline supposed to descend from demons..., or am I tripping? If someone knows more, please explain🙏 (Read the Demon thing from a fan fiction, so that might be why it is not real, also looked it up, and one of their ancestors is supposedly not human)

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