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He had the most distinctive eye color that one could not forget. The first time I travelled to Egypt I knew I would remember the man by his smile alone, he had the gentlest color of red lips with the most perfect teeth I had ever seen. It complicated his long jaw and high cheek bones.- JR_9897mthCommented
her eyes
Mrs Carris had a playful smile in his eyes, "I do not think so, I think he is pretty interesting." - JR_9898mthCommented
He may be good with the spear, but may be lacking with the sword [img=thinking]
Zhang Fengxi almost exploded in anger. - JR_9898mthCommented
bouquet not banquet
Holding onto the doorknob, she opened it "Happy birthday to y-" Ariel stopped in her tracks, the banquet of flowers she held in her other hand fell to the ground. She just had the biggest shock of her life. - JR_9898mthCommented
"Why are you wandering..." not the other way around
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"does" singular-> plural "do/ don't"
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add "s" to the singular use of verbs like "who respects"
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haired
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swallow
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massaged not messaged
Xu Yang sighed as he message his temples, his other hand comfortably pat the little soft body on his chest in comfort, his adaptation ability became quite useful in this situation. The little guy suddenly froze as he looked up, Xu Yang was met with his clear watery eyes and chubby cheeks, resembling a dumpling. - JR_9891yrCommented
Emphasis on “his” vampire😍
Jia Hyson felt he would rather do the first two things in a heartbeat than force the other to change into something he doesn't want to be. Even if Mr Garth was willing for himself, Jia Hyson, who usually loved the idea of breaking someone down and remoulding them into his desired image with his own manipulations, suddenly felt uncomfortable and nauseous thinking about applying anything similar to his chain-smoking vampire. - JR_9891yrCommentedCh 65 5.14 This messenger's lost memories
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Maybe he is part of setnaths soul?
It felt weird, but he never felt this safe and secure before. It must have been caused by the shard, which for some reason welcomed him. His pulsing mark was immediately calming after he touched the shard, and he had to receive inquisitive stares and incessant questioning from the other members, especially the researchers. - JR_9891yrCommented
in one of
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♥️
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Thank god! I was truly worried😂
Lu Yizhou kneaded his aching forehead. The irritation, which he had forcibly suppressed, flared up once again. This time, it was even more intense than before.