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Till Ch83:- Its a really good novel, no doubt about it but every chapter makes my stomach churn. I have to take a break and reread MTWABW to calm myself down...Many of the times, I felt like dropping but I am still holding on to the hope that it will get better just because your last novel is good too(also the yanderes). Even when your grammar was broken, I still enjoyed it and now the writing quality has definitely upgraded so I am looking forward to what you will cook. But, please I sincerely request that you give my man his true love story and make him stop suffering...its really depressing to read.(also duck all the fmls Hope they die in a ditch, rapd by goblins)
If I am being completely honest, this novel felt like I was reading a Korean novel where the author sometimes makes the readers hate the MC and the heroines and pisses off the readers in general but the readers would still continue reading because it is good...So, I am confused, great novel but builds up my frustration sometimes. Great work, author! Keep it up!
I had always kept this novel in my library, used many of my free passes, and some coins on this, and just left this there to read later on because I saw it was doing quite well. And If I'm being really honest...started somewhat okay but later on, became boring to the point that I just skipped 100 or so chapters and just read the last three chapters to move on to read a good novel. Okaish but not worth the hype that brought me to this novel. Still, keep it up, author. Good job!
If I am being brutally honest, this seems like a typical no-brain protagonist harem novel where jade beauties fall left and right into his lap. I read till around ch 20 and that was it for me, I could not read more because of how dumb and cliche the plot was going. And every time a dumb plot did happen, it made me remember all the villain novels I have read, where arrogant d-thinking protagonists like this one whose best thing is his plot armor get rubbed on the ground by the villains with a system. I somewhat enjoyed most of their previous novels but this just feels like a rushed, "I want to write a cultivation novel" story and that is just sad... Still, keep it up author, will support your other novels but just not this shit..sorry
Read till ch.18, I really hate doing a review after soo little chapters but I honestly couldn’t go on reading the novel. I came in thinking it would be a cuthroat(literally) yandere novel with romance bits but it just looks like the ”heroines” see him as an accommodity or a possession rather than a loved one. All he has is face value, they do not care about him...all they care about his face, thats all. And its making me remember bad memories... honestly, but great writing quality with little to none grammar mistakes. Good job author and also if you do decide to write another novel...will read that for sure but not just this one..sorry
Author san, you lied! You said no ntr but the hoe gets a reverse harem which she does not deserve and gets to live a happy satisfied life....but I am still at ch 163 and can’t say much about that but I felt betrayed by the authorsan... Also can someone spoil me and let me know if she suffers in the future I could continue reading this great novel.I really want to continue but the reverse harem of self entitled hoe is offputting me somehow....Great work anyway!!!
If people ask, where the money comes from? at least he can distract them by showing a cover job...I guess
Hello....if anyone reads this...pls reply to me as soon as possible... I am pretty early around 15 chapters in but tbh too scared to continue...seeing the name, I thought it was going to be a good romance with good fml but I don't see it, and even if Sophia is one...I really don't feel good about her...so please somebody tell me...is there a true romance or he is going to get used again so I can avoid getting sad over it later...thanks!
I usually don't like comparing novels but taking Blood Warlock as a reference....dear author I would suggest avoiding creating too many mysteries that later on become plot holes and make the story too confusing also I know I am too early around 60 ch in to judge this but even the twice or thrice happenings when the past enemies still stay alive due to sheer arrogance of the mc and waifu, just contradicts the ruthlessness aspect. Ruthless means making sure the job is done in the worst way possible for the enemy and that too completely. All in all, a really good novel that would follow until the end, if this too doesn't end up becoming the second coming of Blood Warlock(which I sincerely hope does not) I genuinely like the couple. Great work author!
Usually, I don't write a second review for the same novel but I had to give this a second one. Sometimes felt too relatable, sometimes it was my own thoughts that were getting projected that I was keeping inside, sometimes just reading some words gave me goosebumps irl. Everything about this novel is one of the best novels I have read. And the thing that is pissing me off is that good novels like these do not get much recognised but a novel just for horny people get recognition. All in all great work author.Looking forward to any other novels you write. Great work!
The plot, the characters, the world-building, and most importantly the MC is really well written. Some of the parts are so well written that I read them twice or thrice sometimes and even copied those in my notepad to reread those special lines sometimes. Like, damnnnnn I came here for pure evil and got that with a poetic feel. Author, are u the author of Profane Prince with a different penname, my dude Konrad set a benchmark for harem-overpowered MC that many on this website can't keep up and I see this MC following along with it and sometimes even better. All in all, a great work! Wish I found this sooner!
Hello, author if you are reading this pls continue this rewrite of Heavenly Opposers as it was and this too is a great book. My only critique would be please do not make the chapters confusing to read because in HOP, at later chapters around 100 and forward, the story got too jumbled and it was hard to keep up with it also pls donate some of your iq like damnnnnnnnn you smort! Good job!
Considering this has only 40 chapters...I would kindly suggest instead of going the route...oh, I am going to make the heroines my slaves...just kill them, and make them suffer. After reading a bunch of novels with overly proud heroines with nothing to back them up and ending up being a trophy or plot progression for the novel and seeing the heroines acting like they own the world whereas they are just licking the protag cok that pissed me off . So, I searched for a really long time, for a novel that makes the heroes and the heroines suffer for example villain steals the heroines, that is on Meganovel. Anyway, dear author I would suggest please do something like that, I am sure many would enjoy it and great work, already based on your last novel/ Thanks!!!
I wasted my fucking 1 week of life reading this 300 chs where I usually would take 1 to 2 days for completing the same amount, why? because as I continued the novel--- the story pace, the fucking dumb Mf characters were pissing me off to the point that I could not read more than 5-10 ch in one sitting and had to take frequent breaks because that anger was affecting me in my real life. I hate my real life, so to escape my shitty reality, I read novels but then those novels like the one here, have a good start then moving forward become something that really makes me sad and want me to say "Ahh....look how they massacred my boy" Anyway, a good work "albeit" many hiccups that I hope get somehow solved, "albeit" I believe in Author Sama. P.s sorry if I came a little strong.