what is even going on, this whole story is a complete mess. also vocab and sentence structure is lacking

You're nuts if you think 100 chaptets isn't enough to get the ball rolling

Is anyone proof reading these chapters author? Since around 380-400+ sentences have been broken and wording completely unnatural. it feels like a google translate but without and checking to see if the words connect properly or read in a fluid manner. Nothings changed so im worried you thing this is good quality. Maybe a foreign English reader sees no problem but considering its my first language this reads badly.

i mean if u only read 25 u would understand anyway, its like reading 2 chapters of a light novel then complaining u dont understand. pretty dumb

You made the right choice but for the wrong reason, the English becomes unreadable later on. truly bizarre because it usually starts as average and gets better but not this

Lots of praise in the comments, which is mostly true. The world and its inhabitants are very interesting. The one massive gripe and the reason im even here writing this is because the English sentence structure slowly breaks down. It's usually the opposite where it gets better if it was middling to start off, but this started as late as c380 or so. Came back after a long break and the writing just slowly started getting worse. It almost reads like someone used google transliteration and never bothered having a proofreader. Now, at 500 or so, it's unreadable, mistakes every other word, whole paragraph make no sense. I mean if there ever was a way to destroy a novel this would be at the top of the list. Congratulations!

700 chappies into the past and this is still a certified banger. best arc in the story and its not even close

coming back after over 1.4k chapters i van say there is so much foreshadowing in just the small quips and mentions. my god this author is a messiah to this entire genre. if only we had more people like you and awespec 😔

whats the obsession with 4th wall breaking sort of references, who cares about immersion am i right ?

bruh maybe i took too long of a break but who are these 2 characters? [img=faceslap]

tbh with you, after we had his starlord breakthrough and how that went its safe to say hes going to progress extremely slowly, personally ive forgotten about it, we're just telling everyone elses story now hes just foil. i was hoping we would get even some sort of challenge(especially because we are including the world beyond) for him to prove his new worth to keep things interesting but now hes like gone god mode. now im like if everything is under control doesn't everything become less interesting. you remember when he was shipped to the battlefield when he was blind and beat the ods that was a very fun read. i loved that read.

there are no stakes outside of the sin trials, mc is completely untouchable and nothing matters, his cultivation isnt even relevant anymore because its on a broken scale hes so overpowered everything else is irrelevant in comparison, this stretches to any prime acendends. every story has plot armour that perfectly fine but when real challenges are overcome its easy to forget that, but we dont have that here, everything is perfect nothing goes wrong if it does they weren't important anyway

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Every time i think about what it takes to be a writer i subconsciously think about your book and the other 2 and im left feeling breathlessness. How much will i have to invest to reach even a fraction of what you've crafted here? This bar that you've set i cant think about starting knowing that this is the level i would feel I would need to be at to truly be proud of a piece i made. i just look at all those other novels filling the stream and every mediocre one i find even the ones dominating the top10 charts i just think of a world where they have even a fraction of the quality this has.

This whole story is a mess, what is going on with the order of things

Any other free novels? i cant find them reliably

So far there have been 5 Ascensions, 1st was from the moral world to the Emperor/Sovereign world (33% of built up plot devices deleted), 2nd Ascension was from the Sovereign world to the Qingluo/ Creation Dragon subworld (50% of built up plot devices deleted), 3rd Ascension was into the Creation dragon god main world (45% of built up plot lines deleted), 4th Ascension was from Dragon Creation god world to the biggest Creation world in that universe (45-50% of built up plotlines deleted), 5 Ascension was when he crossed universes and became a Creation god (80% of plot lines completely deleted/completely overwritten). What core/fundamental story point remained from the very beginning? only the 4 contrived fires. We even red conned the Creation Drag god son plotline in randomly. Truly perfect story telling

This novel is the embodiment of wide as an ocean deep as a puddle. its weak from the foundation up, even something as integral as his dragon transformation black and blue have been completely deleted along eith a million other plot lines. he just rewrites the story whenever he wants

what a cancer read jesus christ, why are we constantly butting heads with everything. so cringe

i love this man, so wholesome