Review Detail of raccatas in The Primordial Record

Lots of praise in the comments, which is mostly true. The world and its inhabitants are very interesting. The one massive gripe and the reason im even here writing this is because the English sentence structure slowly breaks down. It's usually the opposite where it gets better if it was middling to start off, but this started as late as c380 or so. Came back after a long break and the writing just slowly started getting worse. It almost reads like someone used google transliteration and never bothered having a proofreader. Now, at 500 or so, it's unreadable, mistakes every other word, whole paragraph make no sense. I mean if there ever was a way to destroy a novel this would be at the top of the list. Congratulations!