the Grammer and sentence structure is horrible.it feel like the author is vomiting worlds with no meaning.

ntr ........................................

mc gets the first noticable power up on in CP 100 ,and and this is a multiverse story ,so when will he get the second third or fifth power up like cap 700,man how man is this story dragedout and boring world for the sake of world with no real substance.the first 10 cap, we're very good after that it just goes down hill.

this is trash in every sense of the word.and stop with the fucking daddy calling

this is trash

just like you said he is going to do everything with his mind and wit's than couldn't he use his mind to make a wish without loophole or he is basically an idiot

it is perfect down to the last minute detail

but we will still give it

mc is cuckold..............................

saved me..

I thought the name was just a joke but the author actually like getting cucked

why does this even exist,.................

the best story I have ever read keep up the good work 🏟️🏟️🏟️🏟️🏟️🏟️🔧🧭🤷🏻‍♀️🔧🧭🤷🏻‍♀️🔧♿©️🔧🧭🤷🏻‍♀️🔧🧭🤷🏻‍♀️🔧🧭🤷🏻‍♀️🧭🤷🏻‍♀️🔧🖋️🥟🤼🥟🧭🤼🧭🥟🔧🧭🥟🔧🧭🥟🤼🧭🥟🤼🥟🧭🤼🧭🥟🤼🥟🧭

this is the best story I have read until now and fuck Yuri why the fuck does every hotd fanfic have Yuri in it😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁