thanks

I read chapters till here but you have lost the basic theme of your novel. After getting promoted to Domain lord because of his disciples he barely got any promotion because of his disciples.

I said he is not going to become a traitor, I never said he will be part of Konoha wait for next few chapters and you will find out what I am talking about.

i don't want MC to be a traitor.

yes it do work even in our world, if you can see the movement of muscles not only can you predict the next move but you can see where does the muscles strech the most and if you u hit at that point the opponent will feel huge pain and even internal injuries.

obviously

no he was not, he was very good at taijutsu i accept that he didn't had the time to develop moves like Guy did but he was a genius in taijutsu or else he wouldn't have been able to master eight Gates.

in the world Naruto spiritual energy (or mental energy) and physical energy combine to form chakra so if anyone of it decreases the chakra will automatically be consumed, I tried keeping this element.

Thanks for your opinion. You're right about your point, but the actions of Danzo shown throughout Naruto clearly state that he is someone who can go to any lengths. You're saying that a civil war is quite unrealistic, but don't forget two points: 1. Danzo allowed the entire Konoha to be destroyed because he knew that Tsunade was there and could heal almost anyone. Additionally, during the second and third ninja wars, Hiruzen was said to be at his peak, so Danzo's confidence comes from there.2. Uchiha Karan killed Hiruzen's son, so his extreme actions may be justified.

I will tell you few facts that's childish1. Danzo allied with Rain village just so that Konoha and Iwagakure can fight for more time and he can become Hokage and it is canon.2. Third Hokage let Danzo live when Danzo was almost certain that for attempting assassination on Hokage he will be executed, now this is childish.3. Uchiha clan was hated by all four of the elders due to Tobirama and theirs relationship in Sengoku era. this is also canon.4. After Uchiha clan was executed Hiruzen punished Danzo by saying "your roots are disbanded." Didn't Hiruzen knew about curse mark of roots he knew about it what does this show childish. 4 year old thinking.5. the most important part this my fanfic whatever I write is up to me.

people like conspiracy more than plain story so yeah.

kind of

those shadow that move must also contain chakra and with observation Haki Jiryoku will be able to feel it.If it is mentioned that the shadows of shikamaru doesn't contain chakra then please do tell me.

i guess you are missing one point his bloodline keeps evolving.

That's what I am trying to convey: why would he care to save those Marines who are going to point their guns at him for killing their comrades? And how will he become a 'Marine Hunter'?

please be specific so I can reflect on that.

you have read so far just wait for 10 chapters and maybe you will find what you need.

he will not become a rouge ninja but he will go out of the village politics you will know in future chapters.

yes he will buy not that much as he have his black chakra rods.about conqueror I have no plans for now.

good point I will include it in the future chapters. thanks.