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Im not sure, but i think i already know this story. Correct me if i am wrong author, but havent you dropped a story like this some time ago? I still have some Patr*on chaps lying around on my pc somewhere. If its really you, im happy that youre back! And also, i was really sad/depressed, when you told me you dropped this story (i think last year or so). Did you make changes/ major changes to the story, that are relevant? Anyways enough text, im just so happy that your back!!![img=recommend]
i rlly need an answer pls tell me that ky finds a way to stop this aging after using his powers (mabey even reversing it) or finding a way to give his Power the needed energy that his Power would take from him in the Form of aging or sucking his Vitality out of him. even if this would happen in like 100 chaps i want to know so bad its driving me nuts! pls! đĽş
correct me if im wrong but shouldnt the Name be petter here?
can someone send me a discord link? i dont know where one is so ... thx [img=update][img=recommend]
Now what happened there? ;)
Well first i would write at least a coupe of chaps to capture the reactions of anyone who has interacted with mc in the Real World after he returns ( because of the different personality after the Hunger games). Then you can consider if you want to take a Power aproach (superpowers/magic/etc.) or a survival aproach (refining his survival skills/ mastering weapons and fighting in general). Based on that there are many different Worlds with challenenges he has to Face with either his skills or powers. Or he can gain said Things in a world, based on how you want to progress with this story. Also thanks for the enjoyable work till now and hopefully in the future!.[img=recommend][img=update]
dont let anyone influence you, youre doing good so dont stop! i very much enjoy what you have build so dont care about Haters. Quick question as i am very slow, is the mc only staying in the first World or will he travel to differnt worlds in the future?[img=update][img=recommend]
just imagine anyone from overlord in nazarik as a shadow. Super OP.
i love your idea please do it [img=recommend]
please dont stop i really enjoy this
everything alright???𤨠i hope it is because you are worring me. how long has it been? i think 12 days or so and i cant wait for another chap. pls please i pray to god dont drop this!! PS: I ... may or may not have your location if you drop this novel ...đđ¤
Do you mean stuff or am i lost? in the chap consequenses i have also seen this unwanted s : they never hear"s". i dont know if this is Intentional but its Irritating. pls explain if it is right or just a mistake. good work and dont drop this[img=recommend]
and i dont know if you took my examples into this chap but it was much more pleasant to read than the others. Good Work đđ
bro ..... im not even angry ... anymore (about the cliffhanger) but i am really sad thats its over so fast. When does the next chap come out?
or write something like: Shrugging his shoulders, "Arthur" explained "..."
And again .... the POV change