Review Detail of AidenDamart in Reincarnated as The world's first Demi-Human

Hello author here . Thanks for all the love and support. But first let me introduce myself properly. My name will remain a secret. But I am from a country which is one of the poorest countries in the world. This is my first time writing a novel. Thus I am still inexperienced and a rookie. Also I do not live in any European countries or American countries thus I am not so good at English. So there might be grammatical errors and wrong words .So please do suggest the mistakes I will try my best to solve it