Bully's mother*

I read until the attack ordered by mom's bully. If you think I'm lying, reread until chapter 148, you will notice that everything I said is observable.

Well, if you know the novel's extra, it's better not to read this story, it is clearly inspired by it in several aspects (hunter academy, MC using firearms, toxic relationship with the protagonist's group, characteristics, etc). That said, this story is worse than your reference. Firstly, the mc is a very cringe edge lord, despite being a supposed adult transmigrator, he manages to be worse than a 14 year old child when he releases his "catchphrases", it seems that the transmigrator was subjugated by the original soul and who The old guy is in charge. Second, the author doesn't know how to describe emotional nuances, he usually uses something like "Wow! Why did I want to help him here? Why do I want to be close to him? Why does my heart race around him? Why do I feel sad seeing him beaten? ", that kind of description is quite disheartening. Finally, in terms of general plot and world building, the story is not bad, but these aspects associated with characters and dialogue end up making the experience unpleasant. The following quote from Sasuke Uchiha: "My eyes have been closed for too long, all my goals are in darkness" is something I can see the MC saying while having breakfast with Sylvie.

Dropped. I have nothing to complain about, the author writes well, he respects the rules of the DxD world, he keeps the characters' personalities close to the original material. It's an excellent fanfiction. Unfortunately I won't continue, the protagonist's characterization is that of a 100% chaotic evil psychopath lol, I don't like reading things like that. Those who don't care about this can read without fear, they won't regret it.

Yeah, I hate english speakers beacause that. Oh my god, For god, for Merlin, for Kami. Sucks

I'm gonna give you my stones bro, update

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Leaving here, nothing against your story, I've already created hatred for everything associated with solo leveling

Fast paced, protagonist becomes a god overnight, characters are not built, they are just plot devices with names, boring cheat, this story is a complete mess. The author has potential in writing, but in this story he wants things to happen, this leads to inconsistent developments and a strange plot. I do not recommend.

Everything is very scattered. System screens occupy 90% of the chapters. The model system is dispersed across several characters, it is not possible to understand where it ends and where it begins, and most of the models are irrelevant to the story and only appear when they are mentioned in acquisition and progress.

About voodu harbinger

Well I was enjoying this story but I had to leave it here. Brother, totally unnecessary, stupid and incompatible with the world of dxd. it seems like every dxd writer asks the question "How can I ruin this story?" When he finds the answer, he goes there and does it.

The development feels so forced, things don't connect naturally and the female characters have negative IQs. The Protagonist follows that omniscience trope even when he has already changed countless things.

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It's fun, but it's slow paced. Has it been less than a week? When you think like that, the interactions between the characters become quite unrealistic. Authors should not fear summaries and time skips. Of course this is my advice as a reader.

Thank you!

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Well, it's of consistent quality and uses the King of Heroes concept, so I'm a little biased, but it looks like a work worth following for now

If you like highschool dxd, this story is not worth it. The author does not stick to the basic aspects of the world, in addition the story insists on infinite training. Many authors confuse imagination magic with transforming imagination into reality, if that were the case, Ajuka would be equal to God. Another bad thing is the scenario itself, even Sairaorg's family didn't hate him for not having the power of destruction, they just didn't want him to inherit the surname and house Baal, his insistence on the matter led to his banishment, the Gremorys didn't They are saints, but they wouldn't go so far as to erase the MC's memories, the worst is the scenario of the badass soldier who criticizes everyone and trains the protagonist in dxd this guy would die just for opening his mouth.

Well, Will needing help again You, our boy need more power go birrrr