Review Detail of PrinceOfThisWorld in Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest

Well, if you know the novel's extra, it's better not to read this story, it is clearly inspired by it in several aspects (hunter academy, MC using firearms, toxic relationship with the protagonist's group, characteristics, etc). That said, this story is worse than your reference. Firstly, the mc is a very cringe edge lord, despite being a supposed adult transmigrator, he manages to be worse than a 14 year old child when he releases his "catchphrases", it seems that the transmigrator was subjugated by the original soul and who The old guy is in charge. Second, the author doesn't know how to describe emotional nuances, he usually uses something like "Wow! Why did I want to help him here? Why do I want to be close to him? Why does my heart race around him? Why do I feel sad seeing him beaten? ", that kind of description is quite disheartening. Finally, in terms of general plot and world building, the story is not bad, but these aspects associated with characters and dialogue end up making the experience unpleasant. The following quote from Sasuke Uchiha: "My eyes have been closed for too long, all my goals are in darkness" is something I can see the MC saying while having breakfast with Sylvie.