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FTG its way to op and hard to get. He might not even learn this in the end.
There's already the outcome of the massacre, so I don't have to give spoilers here. ( ch 22 I think )
Don't worry, there won't be a relationship until he gets older.
Oi, sim nos capítulos para frente ja esta no modo ´correto´. :3 Irei arrumar os primeiros logo mais.
It's a good excuse since the Naruto universe revolves around destiny, with prophecies and everything. But as the protagonist is not from this world. He will still learn many things about destiny, good and bad. (In fact, this is already mentioned in later chapters, >.< ) If you continue reading you will see the struggle, suffering and victory. Well victory is still in the early stages. But it's something interesting since, as you said, even with all the little ´´ cheats ´´ Ryo is still pathetically weak compared to someone who is really strong. For now
They don't explain so well in the manga what happened to the Senju Clan, it's more like 'The clan was disbanded and is hidden' Or something like that, so I decided to put them in my Fanfic. (Of course this could cause problems in the lore, but this will happen eventually or not, no spoilers :3
Obrigado pela avaliação !. A fanfic ainda esta no inicio, o protagonista ainda esta fraco, e vai melhorar com o tempo. Ele não é nenhum super gênio para derrotar um Jounin com 7 anos realmente >.< pretendo manter um nivel de poder parecido com a progressão do manga, mesmo com alguns poderes novos que vão aparecer . Então todo comentário e opinião é bem vinda sempre.
Hey autor here, thanks for the review. The fanfic is still in its early chapters. I'm taking the comments into account, since even though it's a fanfic, which will contain original elements ( golden Coin and some more things ), it's a story that will still go hand in hand with the events of the manga, I don't know about the "crackfic" part. But I'm working to improve fanfic development. Once again, all constructive comments are welcome. <3 I hope you give a second chance for the chapters that will be released in the next few days.
It's a way that I find interesting, but seeing the other novels here, I changed that for the next chapters onwards. Thanks for the comment <3
On ch 15 : 3
On ch 15 : 3
Well noted, the answer would be, yes and no. It's something that will unfold later on. So no spoiler now :3