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Drake_20043257

Drake_20043257

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I am starting to write novels

2022-01-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • Drake_20043257
    Drake_200432572mth
    Replied to BAM_AMVS

    no not for the time being but 1 to 8 chapters within a month because exams have started and I'm just writing for fun .

    Ch 26 chapter 26 : Violet Luminous City 1
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    Reincarnated as Ancestor of a Great Clan
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  • Drake_20043257
    Drake_200432572mth
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    I read all the chapters and when it came to chapters above 600 I can clearly say that the author is clearly using Chat GPT for the chapters. because of this I get irritated by unwanted descriptions and an unknown old story like sentences where words like testimony to his long life,testimony to his powers. unwanted descriptions to make the chapters more big and to do so author used Chat GPT and because of that many times reading the chapters inbetween the scenes the tone of the writing changes and it really makes the whole experience of reading the chapters real bad. I know that those sentences using AI comes very very rarely but when that comes it really makes me think of stop reading and supporting this novel because it just makes me irritated by that. I don't know about other readers but for me everything about this novel other than after some chapters i.e after 600 chapters Writing Quality fall to a very low level because of addition unwanted descriptions in between the protagonists looks and sentence like because of him the air become this and that because he is a demon bla bla... . well using descriptions once or twice is all right but many times too much and that's not the thing but the discription doesn't even match up to the story. I just want to say to author is that just don't use AI to make the chapters bigger and if used just change the tone of the sentences

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    Dungeon of Pride, Laplace
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  • Drake_20043257
    Drake_200432573mth
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    guys I want to continue this story very much but 😭 but I don't get the time for world building . I want this novel to be a perfect one so in the near future I will restart writing the novel once again but for now this novel will be paused. I will start writing another novel it will basically be a translation of a mtl novel and I will try that all the key components different.

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  • Drake_20043257
    Drake_200432574mth
    Replied to Joao_Pires

    I know that the description is unnecessary but just bare with this until chapter 30 because I have already written 50 chapters so it will take me a lot of time to redo all chapters . So I will start rewriting chapters from chapter 31st chapter. This is my first time writing a web novel so I'm thankful for giving a review 😁.As this is my first web novel I want it to be as perfect as it could be 🤔.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Li Tian
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    Drake_200432574mth
    Replied to Joao_Pires

    Just bear with me for the first 30 chapters, as I lay the groundwork for the story. After that, I'll shift to the real narrative without over-description.

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  • Drake_20043257
    Drake_200432577mth
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    This novel will have regular chapter release and will not be dropped till end and I think this will be a longer novel more than 1000 chapter at least with world building and character building.

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    Mystic Magical World(Dropped)
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  • Drake_20043257
    Drake_200432572yr
    Replied to NoWoRRyMaN

    I want to know that will mc die at the end of novel because of chapter 69

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    Unrivaled Demon's Odyssey
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