Drake_20043257
I am starting to write novels
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I read all the chapters and when it came to chapters above 600 I can clearly say that the author is clearly using Chat GPT for the chapters. because of this I get irritated by unwanted descriptions and an unknown old story like sentences where words like testimony to his long life,testimony to his powers. unwanted descriptions to make the chapters more big and to do so author used Chat GPT and because of that many times reading the chapters inbetween the scenes the tone of the writing changes and it really makes the whole experience of reading the chapters real bad. I know that those sentences using AI comes very very rarely but when that comes it really makes me think of stop reading and supporting this novel because it just makes me irritated by that. I don't know about other readers but for me everything about this novel other than after some chapters i.e after 600 chapters Writing Quality fall to a very low level because of addition unwanted descriptions in between the protagonists looks and sentence like because of him the air become this and that because he is a demon bla bla... . well using descriptions once or twice is all right but many times too much and that's not the thing but the discription doesn't even match up to the story. I just want to say to author is that just don't use AI to make the chapters bigger and if used just change the tone of the sentences
guys I want to continue this story very much but đ but I don't get the time for world building . I want this novel to be a perfect one so in the near future I will restart writing the novel once again but for now this novel will be paused. I will start writing another novel it will basically be a translation of a mtl novel and I will try that all the key components different.
I know that the description is unnecessary but just bare with this until chapter 30 because I have already written 50 chapters so it will take me a lot of time to redo all chapters . So I will start rewriting chapters from chapter 31st chapter. This is my first time writing a web novel so I'm thankful for giving a review đ.As this is my first web novel I want it to be as perfect as it could be đ¤.