4 din hogaye next chapter kab??

Moreeee

Neji was a year older no?

Just adopt someone else maybe?? With no dad

+1 just give him horriblr death

Is that you john

Great till now can’t wait for more. Hope u get well

Yes

Idk what to say writing is good but when you still in love with the one that left you for dead. Bruh? Some plot you got there

Just don’t do rias akeno koneko aika murayama katase etc. every novel has that. Maybe do sona or some new chick

Just do some devil fruitish dojutsu

Bro the ones who dont like this are the guys who like chinese harem novels that suck. Don’t rewrite this its already good and with your ideas it will get better and better

Keep it up bro your uploads always makes my day better.

Good work Mate👌👌its getting interesting

Again imma just be real with you. Last chapter this chapter and the next chapter should have been the same chapter cause this dumb pov’s taking too long I hope you finish these talks within the next two chapters.

Nah go one piece i , i think you can write 7 deadly sins easily because it has demons. Seeing you write in one piece will be intresting, it will also test your limit as an author.

Bro next chapter please

1)So yeah I don’t know why some one who slayed mountain is talking with an incompetent lord and a really bad father. 2) you’ve made him powerful enough to kill that dumb lord take lyanna away. 3) the way it is going right now is really similar to chinese novels powerful but low key after 10 chapters face slapping. 4) hope you finish this ark fast. #1 loyal reader

Nice 👍 hope the next chapters are longer cause this is right now is more like daily life until fall. Author-kun i think a bit more words would really be nice if it was a baseball match i would get the short chapter but few chapters.