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Atrox_H14hCommented9. Blue Beetle/Dan Garrett face claim is Adam Scott. His suit is similar to his look in Young Justice.- Atrox_H14hCommented8. Hawkgirl/Shayera Hall face claim is Claudia Doumit. She is styled similarly with similar armor as Hawkman from Black Adam but colored gold, yellow, and green.
- Atrox_H14hCommented7. Vixen/Amaya Jiwe face claim is Maisie Richardson-Sellers. She is looks just like her 'Legends of Tomorrow' version.
- Atrox_H14hCommented5. Reverse Flash/Eobard Thawne from 'Arrowverse' played by Matt Letscher.
- Atrox_H15hPosted
Great work, the pacing of story seems good. As usual, a protagonist with mental trauma (although it's not much in this story) for modern family fanfiction, I only read few which doesn't follow this troupe. I didn't quite like the love interest and their relationship, it seems like something's off, or a bit rushed idk, maybe I'm biased. It's your story and good work. Good luck...
- Atrox_H17hCommentedShe chuckled, "Well, you always had a vivid imagination."
- Atrox_H7dCommentedHer name was Anna, and I was successfully able to date her. But our relationship didn't last long as I saw her with another man who was much older and richer than me. Later, I found out that the man was married and even had a daughter similar to her age.
- Atrox_H1mthCommentedWell, the young boy in the dream was smiling enough for both of them.
- Atrox_H1mthReplied to Kiran_Sinha_9549
Definitely!
"As I said before, even though you girls are devils, I don't really mind. In fact, I really like you guys and would like to form a friendship with you all. If you ever need my help, I will come to your aid. Even if it is something trival, I will come and give you a helping hand. That is the kind of person Ryuji Kamijou is." - Atrox_H1mthReplied to RatKing1stThat was the only thing Andrew thought as he read the Light Novel of High School DxD. Rias Gremory the main heroine must have a screw loose if she fell in love with Issei of all people. Even after he read the entire series, he still felt that Issei was a weirdo, but a lucky weirdo.
- Atrox_H1mthCommented"This is just the start."
- Atrox_H2mthCommented"We continue our operations. It would be best for the alien to keep to himself, as he has usually done. If not, a lesson should be in order".
- Atrox_H2mthCommentedThe years had passed and Thanos had begun to build his organization, recruiting people existing the gray area of the world - not too good, nor too evil - as too much of either could bring them in conflict with his own morals. He left Russia and went to Jersey City, where he built his own company under the guise of a construction business owned by the Maximoff siblings. In reality, it was a base made by the Mad Titan to prepare for the upcoming events that would arrive in a few years. He used this base to recruit potential allies, gather items that he could get his hands on, and make some profits thanks to his construction company.
- Atrox_H2mthCommentedThanos ignored the voice's ramblings and began to ponder what might have given him away. But his thoughts were interrupted by the SHIELD agent repeating the order to land. Thanos then decided on an insane plan. He pushed the fearful pilot aside and took the controls, Using the mad titan's intellect to his advantage, he applied what he saw when he observed the pilot. His movements became quick and efficient, as if suddenly honed by countless hours of training in an aircraft.
- Atrox_H2mthCommented
Ya, practically your plot armor.
For a second I worried that I had miscalculated the area of effect. But Solomon's legacy came in clutch once again. - Atrox_H2mthCommentedJust testing something to know if my idea works.. nothing new to read..sorry for this fellasss...
- Atrox_H2mthCommentedJust testing something to know if my idea works.. nothing new to read..sorry for this fellasss...
- Atrox_H3mthReplied to Jerry_Magnuson
One of the best I've read. Once you finished reading it, you might find other MC's kinda lacking. So if you're a newbie to Novel reading won't suggest to start with this, because your expectations will be so high after reading this. For the chapters, it has around 2300 chapters.
"I don't care. My daughter is special, she is smart. since she thought her new dad was better than me, who am I to say otherwise? I no longer have a daughter." I said calmly, leaving Lily stunned at how emotionless my tone was. - Atrox_H3mthReplied to LuigiGalaxy
Maybe or correcting grammars.
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