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I have several questions: -where is the dialogue between Ron Hermione and Harry. -where are the explanations of the changes made and what exactly happened (you only talk about it vaguely at the end of the chapter). -and where is the transition between Harry and Natalia's dialogue with the moment where he suddenly starts talking with Cho Apart from that thank you very much for this chapter, I will read the rest carefullyđ„°đ€đ©”
Sa pue l'erreur à plein nez, ça se voit que l'utilisation de l'artefact aura d'énorme conséquences. Je me demande si sa va accélérer sa mort ou si les conséquences auront un rapport avec Grindelwald et Sirius ou encore la résurrection de Voldemort. And so I'm French.
Otherwise there is also Marill who can transform into a giga-attacker with the right talent and is also the dragon destroyer. You can also choose Horsea which with good potential can also be very good and has very good evolution. I offer you these pokemons because if we look at the geography of the pokemon world, they are the most realistic that you will find if we do not count the most common and it also changes pokemons from other fanfics like Locklas, Milotic where the starters and it attracts less interest.
For the water type pokemon I saw that you already had potential support with Audino, and attackers with Growlithe and Abra. So you would need a tank like Spheal who has good potential to be a tank and has a wide range of abilities that against many types and with the right talent (Thick Fat) his defense will be even more cheat, for the encounter you can make a spell that his herd migrates in the winter and you find them, he can also transport you in the sea and he can also move on the land.
Hi I'm French and I wanted to tell you that I love your work, I'm sorry for you for the difficulties you encountered and I hope you can solve them and that it's not too serious. Anyway I'm happy that you started writing again, the way you see pokemon is quite interesting and different compared to other fanfiction so I can tell you that in any case you already have a loyal reader who will be waiting for your new posts. sorry for english its not my forte
Hi thank you for your chapter and for answering your question it would be nice if there was a second sensei in addition to the first who would teach him in depth a shinobi discipline since a lot of people came to see his match including jonin (like Genjustu, Taijutsu , Fuinjutsu or even Kenjustsu). And honestly it would be nice if he found a long-term goal and was less on edge. One thing that would be even better for MC is to find someone his age to be his/her best friend to watch his back and make him less alone.
Hi I'm french and I've been following your story since those early days I don't know if you'll read this or believe me my every day of the week you post a chapter and a day I can escape my life and follow your story. Tango with death is a great story and even if I have to wait 7-8 years I will wait because it's worth the cost!!! I hope you won't stop because I will be waiting for you and will remain an eternal fan of your story. Sign, an unconditional fan PS: Sorry for my English I'm not really strong in this language đ