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Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

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2022-01-02 JoinedAscension Island
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  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa2mth
    Commented

    they don't tell you the whole story because you make rookie mistakes quite often and repeatedly.

    Ch 630 Ch 630: Setting Up The Formation
    Divine God Against The Heavens
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa2mth
    Commented

    give the villagers common sense.... what does he know

    Ch 616 Ch 616: Golden Flame Stone
    Divine God Against The Heavens
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa2mth
    Commented

    100K to 30M talk about the price of stupidity

    Ch 455 Ch 455: Getting The Dragon Blood Stone
    Divine God Against The Heavens
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa2mth
    Commented

    the mc is kinda dumb and does obviously dumb stuff quite often. I thought he developed out of that by now.

    Ch 454 Ch 454: Seven Dao Manifestation Realm Martial Artists
    Divine God Against The Heavens
    Fantasy · RazaKarim
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa4mth
    Commented

    Cliffs Notes went the way of the encyclopedia !?!?! Booooooo

    Ch 514 Flattery and Bootlicking
    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa4mth
    Posted

    still one of the best graphic novels I've read

    Solo Leveling(Only I level up)
    · DUBU (REDICE STUDIO), Chugong, h-goon
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa4mth
    Posted

    The story premise has a tried and true platform, but the story itself jumps off that platform and gives the same feeling as free falling into the unknown. the pacing seems rushed and jumps a bit. I find myself saying, "Uh, what?" almost every chapter I read. I read to the pay wall to give a benefit of the doubt but decided to stop at the wall.

    Apocalypse I can Synthesis Anything
    Sci-fi · Chaos_Gray
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa5mth
    Commented

    this chapter is 2 paragraphs repeated over and over in different ways. "He kept looking to look at what he was looking at because he wanted to look at it."

    Ch 208 Swallowing Medicine; Completely Opening the Pill Saint's Secret Realm
    Sharing Tamed Beasts' Talents for Eternal Life
    Eastern · A Little Immortal
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  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa5mth
    Posted

    good writing and development. the story was on a decent path but after the doom arc it takes a left and has the feel of rush to finish.

    MMORPG: I was BUGGED
    Games · MiuNovels
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa5mth
    Posted

    Popped up on my free read but this was well written. has some of the tropes you see but not over done. The MC has a relatable vibe and he's not OP, just smart.

    Re: Apocalypse Game
    Games · Avan
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa6mth
    Posted

    The intermittent Olde English is a fun touch and taking a break on the back stroke of a face slap is like a mid season cliff hanger of a canceled TV show.

    Leveling Up With My Pet
    Fantasy · Akiii365
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa6mth
    Commented

    this sounds like "we would like to speak with you about your maintenance contract"

    Ch 264 A Song Of Fire and Ice [Part 2]
    Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa6mth
    Commented

    so, we hang a left here aaaaand we're off

    Ch 59 Interrogation
    The Evolution of Genius: Every Night, I Get Smarter!
    Urban · WorldScholar
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  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa6mth
    Commented

    At first I thought it was filler gibberish for the pillar but then, boom, spanish

    Ch 890 Chapter 890: A New Day, a New Beginning. 2
    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa6mth
    Posted

    The novel has some potential but the chapter uploads are mismatched and duplicates at around 180s...

    Alter Dimension: Lucky Dungeon Master
    Fantasy · YouthGod
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa7mth
    Commented

    Whats with the repeat chapters, the rest of the chapters are all repeats...

    Ch 168 Synthesizing Skills!
    Alter Dimension: Lucky Dungeon Master
    Fantasy · YouthGod
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa7mth
    Posted

    A worthwhile read. The story progresses rather well, the world building is slowly introduced thru the chapters, and tbr character development is solid for the main characters but leave something to desire for the minor ones at this point.

    Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize
    Urban · RavenClaw471
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  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa7mth
    Posted

    The MC can't catch a break... it is one uphill struggle after another after another. I kept reading to see if there's some calm, nope

    The Abandoned Husband Dominates
    Urban · I Have Something To Say
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  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa7mth
    Posted

    Interesting and one of my favorite novels thus far. The development of the characters and overall power structure are steady and fast pace. When the MC gets too powerful there is something that he has to figure out or overcome. The overarching "bad guy" still making plans but we only catch the occasional glimpse.

    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
    detail
  • Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa
    Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa7mth
    Posted

    The character development and "future" plot hints are pretty well written. The future hints come as brief side stories or a "meanwhile elsewhere" type of paragraph. The world background is sometimes glossed over but not to the point that it takes from the story. Some fight scenes take a few chapters and some power upgrades are a few day time skip. I look forward to future chapters of the novel.

    The Soul System in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Alan_Wafula
    detail