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Veldrand7mthPostedInteresting book, as a good potential but I, personnaly, would have loved to have a more detailed transformation arc. I wait to see what the author as in store for us. My tought are that it would be great to add a romance in the much later stage, when he became a big boss, in the storie to push him to change again for better or worse. That's what I think, author, you can take it and make it wathever you want, surprise us, or trow my tought in the trash bin, your book after all.
- Veldrand11mthReplied to Lucinda_Hacker
Ruso in the punisher
Russo got off easier, finalizing his growth at a stocky and hairy 170cm tall. He was near the maximum sizes for waist, but that wasn't fat, he was simply solid muscle. - Veldrand11mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
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yes, but Earth as a child of Author. The one and only with the main character halo, THE PLOT ARMOR.
"Qincar was special, that person was an offspring of a Divinity, I've done all kinds of test on Earth and there was no one like that here."The overseer said as he was looking at the others - Veldrand11mthCommented
I know where that backroud come from...
Martial arts became much more popular, the best MMA fighters and boxers were making more money than the biggest soccer players, suddenly the world was crazy about martial arts again, and every school now had martial art classes which students had to participate in to be able to pass. - Veldrand11mthCommentedIt hadn't even been 10 minutes since this strange phenomenon occurred when I noticed the people around me collapsing and becoming unconscious.
- Veldrand11mthReplied to Shankss
that's a secret for later kiddo
"Is it from my father or mother? Maybe my father wooed my mother who belongs to a rich family and eloped." - Veldrand11mthCommentedThe flintlock pistol was loaded and ready to draw, was placed on his left waist and his focus was at an all-time high.
- Veldrand11mthCommented
a sage man once sais: I will punch you to death, if you tore my arm off, I will kick you to death, and if you take my leg away, I will bit you to death. That's the spirit my man.
"Since I am going to die pathetically, I will bring you down even if I had to bite you to death." - Veldrand11mthCommentedHis eyes opened wide and with a surge of anger, he roared like a wounded beast"Who hell...Hey, mom what's up?"
- Veldrand11mthCommented"Shut the hell up," He spoke in a half-asleep state and hit the button of the alarm with a bang, turning it off.
- Veldrand1yrReplied to LuxJay
your asuption only work if th car fly high in the sky. if it's under 10 meters height and with a world where you're more powerful with your fist than with a gun, you can understand the logic.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Veldrand1yrReplied to Mahaksh
Third state :
This person was Kary, a girl who liked to be low key. She was a secretary in a clinic by day, and a pro gamer by night. - Veldrand1yrReplied to
Second state:
This person was Kary, a girl who liked to be low key. She was a secretary in a clinic by day, and a pro gamer by night. - Veldrand1yrReplied to
First state :
This person was Kary, a girl who liked to be low key. She was a secretary in a clinic by day, and a pro gamer by night. - Veldrand1yrReplied to Jclion'My chances can't get better with this game. No one will have any advantage over anyone for a while.' He thought while taking his morning coffee.
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- Veldrand1yrReplied to CursedLoli
bruh, at least you have something. mine is null.
[Charisma]: 1 - Veldrand1yrReplied to Veldrand
sorry, the idiot part is not meant for you specificaly. more for the addition of your comment and the original comment. I got lil'bit too flared up
He spent a long time doing everything he could to succeed in every game he played, mastering every possible class in the VR world and learning every single technique, even surpassing human capabilities. And in the end, he achieved far more than the fame he desired, rising to the position of a god, which only one person can hold in the game world.