Review Detail of Veldrand in The Conqueror Of Cities!

Interesting book, as a good potential but I, personnaly, would have loved to have a more detailed transformation arc. I wait to see what the author as in store for us. My tought are that it would be great to add a romance in the much later stage, when he became a big boss, in the storie to push him to change again for better or worse. That's what I think, author, you can take it and make it wathever you want, surprise us, or trow my tought in the trash bin, your book after all.