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Daji_1226dReplied to PRINCEAETHER- Daji_1227dPosted
It’s a good read if you can ignore the humour and moments of narcissism, but the synopsis made me think I was going to be getting a hero who was reincarnated and decided to have fun and treat this life as retiring from that life, but overall interesting concept still to early for an actual review. - in conclusion just give it a read, either you’ll like it or you won’t
- Daji_1228dReplied to Gurnoor_Singh_4533
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The moment he summoned a red orb, resembling a marble, and hurled it into the lake to display his power, I was both horrified by its destructive force and strangely captivated. Witnessing this display of pure power not only made me wet in my panties but also deepened my understanding of his formidable abilities. - Daji_121mthCommented
Tbf you’d probably have to scale the strength of mha up but it is a fanfic so go wild
(Honestly, now that I think about it, I might like to make this fanfic a slight One Punch Man Crossover. I do like some of the characters like Garou, Bang, Bomb, King, and the Waifu are generally better. Fubuki, as for this chapter I made up my mind to use a character from a Doujin for reasons. - Daji_121mthCommentedCh 16 Finalizing The Plan
- Daji_121mthReplied to Mad_CrazerCh 4 Chapter - 4 [ Systems And First Navy Encounter! ]
- Daji_121mthReplied to Mad_CrazerCh 3 Chapter - 3 [ New Companion? ]
- Daji_121mthCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: A Chance to change my life
- Daji_121mthCommentedCh 1 1-New place, meeting a Fox.
- Daji_121mthCommentedCh 59 Mana's Admirable Visit to the Pub
- Daji_121mthReplied to MaybonnieCh 14 Do you want to be better than him?
- Daji_121mthCommented
Deleted book?
This book has been deleted. - Daji_128mthCommented
Baso a stepping stone…
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So far it just feels robotic and awkward
Boruto had gone to the dining room where Hinata and Himawari were sitting to tell them about what Rosé said to which Hinata was not sure on what to do but before she could deny it Rosé entered the room with only his blindfold and shorts on and then walked in front of Hinata and said "Aunt Hinata dose not need to worry they are not harmful at all as he said this while he lifted the right side of his blindfold showing his bright and beautiful light blue eyes which seemed to hold a galaxy in them." - Daji_128mthPosted
Writing quality- 3 stars because it’s a rewrite and it’s fully of minor spelling mistakes. Updates- no clue. Story development- next to none all interactions seem rather bland especially the intro with the gods. Character design- it’s borderlands so decent characters you can’t go wrong with them, but that’s not the issue it’s the gods at the start or your mc who’s main motivation seems to be “ah I want to be hybrid” or just being overly edgy. World background- I originally thought of bumping it to three then again ratings don’t truly mean anything on this site but it’s borderlands, whilst yes its a good world author but my main issue is you’ve gone into this heavily expecting the reader to know the world, while I do agree most who read this will it’s always better to include the details of the world because you seem to veer away and go head first into action skipping the world building you could be doing. Apologies if this came across ranty but I do believe you can truly improve author, but then again if this is a side thing then straight I’ll condense it into this- just make your character more interesting and not just two dimensional-
- Daji_128mthReplied to Daji_12Ch 3 Chapter 2: A Day on Pandora (Rework)
- Daji_128mthCommentedCh 3 Chapter 2: A Day on Pandora (Rework)
- Daji_128mthReplied to Sans_722Ch 1 Chapter one: the origin (edited)
- Daji_128mthCommented
That answers my question
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