Review Detail of Daji_12 in Borderlands: Siren in the Badlands

Writing quality- 3 stars because it’s a rewrite and it’s fully of minor spelling mistakes. Updates- no clue. Story development- next to none all interactions seem rather bland especially the intro with the gods. Character design- it’s borderlands so decent characters you can’t go wrong with them, but that’s not the issue it’s the gods at the start or your mc who’s main motivation seems to be “ah I want to be hybrid” or just being overly edgy. World background- I originally thought of bumping it to three then again ratings don’t truly mean anything on this site but it’s borderlands, whilst yes its a good world author but my main issue is you’ve gone into this heavily expecting the reader to know the world, while I do agree most who read this will it’s always better to include the details of the world because you seem to veer away and go head first into action skipping the world building you could be doing. Apologies if this came across ranty but I do believe you can truly improve author, but then again if this is a side thing then straight I’ll condense it into this- just make your character more interesting and not just two dimensional-