Review Detail of Daji_12 in MHA GHOST
Review detail
It’s a good read if you can ignore the humour and moments of narcissism, but the synopsis made me think I was going to be getting a hero who was reincarnated and decided to have fun and treat this life as retiring from that life, but overall interesting concept still to early for an actual review. - in conclusion just give it a read, either you’ll like it or you won’t
MHA GHOST
PRINCEAETHER
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Most I could suggest for improvements are when you do a sudden pov change just let the readers know via something like -pov change (name) Something along those lines. But one of the things I do like is how you portray the relationship between the mc and his mother 10/10
PRINCEAETHER:Yeah I can't control that but still I will improve my writing level and take your suggestion .
Its just that it's his character and this is reboot version and in previous version I have tried to make his personality aloof and cold and but you see it's more fun according to me if there is humour and i personally liked his character and worry not there will be some moments where he will completely switch his personality .
Well I don’t hate the humour it adds to the character and does make for a better read, it’s just not every joke lands but there are moments it works
PRINCEAETHER:Its just that it's his character and this is reboot version and in previous version I have tried to make his personality aloof and cold and but you see it's more fun according to me if there is humour and i personally liked his character and worry not there will be some moments where he will completely switch his personality .
Daji_12:Well I don’t hate the humour it adds to the character and does make for a better read, it’s just not every joke lands but there are moments it works
Daji_12:Most I could suggest for improvements are when you do a sudden pov change just let the readers know via something like -pov change (name) Something along those lines. But one of the things I do like is how you portray the relationship between the mc and his mother 10/10