I found the MTL version is more enjoyable to read although it is a MTL. One of the thing I found is the MTL version is more light and contain more sense of humour while this one feeling more heavy. This one portrayed the third hokage as an old guilt-ridden man while the real character of the old man is very sly. This cne tried to push danzo as an enemy for targeting the MC. It is said that this translation trying to maintain the slice of life genre in this novel but it cut so many interesting conversation between the characters. overall i think the MTL version is more enjoyable as an slice of life novel.. i don't know how long my comment will exist here...

*Riding

hey author if you read this say hey... i hope kushina and mikoto can give birth to the MC's child and MC don't have another wife beside these 2 like the MTL... although kurenai yuhi is great but too many waifu will only drag the story...

as the story goes, it becomes boring.. what is the purpose of MC existence if he can't even kill the protagonist and always needs to look at his back.. he can just cripple the protagonist since it didn't break the deal between MC and the god..

too much nonsense at the beginning.. can't brain anymore...

that's how itachi was born that night...

https://www.novelbed.com/book/douluo-hang-up-and-become-a-god mtl link

we want more.. we want more.. please update.... update other stories too such as pro at hugging thigh...

mix 2 and 1

1. you need to get through dozen of boring chapters to understand what this story all about.. 2. the author mocked other stories like cliche bunch and didn't realize he do the same except he need to do dozen of chapters to tie the story.. 3. don't waste your time on this . 4. Read agent of shield.. 5. hail hydra

is the author become mentally retard at this point of time while writing the few chapters. there is no connection at all between what is happening right now.

dang.. i hate when mc playing around too much instead of settle the opponent as quickly as possible.. when thing out of his control he regretted it.. urgghh

give me strength to get through the rest of the chapter .. how come ossan like to participate in little girls talk.. should change the title to degenerate hero

i have read until chapter 27.. this is the story about 'nampa otoko' trying to flirt with every girls he met in almost every chapter.. you have been warned..

nampa otoko... sigh.....

better don't waste your time on this.. i am fucking mad wasting my time reading this shit...

Jeffery return home and batman appear in the city . yea, only stupid people can't figure it out...

can't continue to read it anymore.. too much nonsense.. too little screen time for little froggy.. too much focus on little character such as peter.. gwen got most of the focus instead of mc.

too many monologue make the reading experience really bad.. can you just use passive sentences tro describe the situation instead of making it a monologue.. btw.. it is nice fanfic tho..

can anyone tell me how long the dao path of Nine Extreme daoyuan is? the author keep introduce term without explanation..