At the time of writing this review, I have read all the available chapters and can give a brief summary. The story is written in good language, making it a pleasure to read even through Google Translator. At the moment, only a small part of the Naruto world is included in the story - the academy and the Hyuga clan, but they are written well, the characters have their own personalities and goals, they are not extras for the main character. The only thing that confuses us at the moment is the question - is everything that is happening reality or is it an illusion? I understand that this may be the author's intention, the secret of his fanfic. But, honestly, this very concept, the possibility that everything that is happening is just an illusion of Madara-kun, puts me off reading But overall, the story is interesting and has potential; it’s worth spending your time on. Author, keep writing, you're doing great :) Google translator

I will briefly describe this fanfic so that its low rating is clear. This is another novel about a person from our world getting caught up in a villain/minor character/NPC from a book/game that the MC read/played. The idea is not original, but it is still interesting when executed well. So, this work is not that case. Literally, the main character has neither character nor any story, he is bored in his reality before getting caught, since he cannot find a worthy opponent and feel alive again The author decided to make him a combat maniac who is not interested in anything else - Okay, so be it. But after the rebirth, the fun part begins - the body into which the MC moves is the body of a typical aristocratic villain who has no skills and who leads the life of a vegetable. But suddenly he develops amazing skills and behaves completely differently. And no one cares about this - he has matured, hid his skills. This is what the butler says, who has been looking after him all his life, and even his father. Imagine that your brother or relative suddenly began to demonstrate something that he had never been able to do. Will you say everything is ok? Talent? Or maybe he managed, living in a closed family society, to hide his strength? I admit that things might get better, but I really doubt it. Author, work on your skills, think through your work before publishing it. Google Translate

I really love it when English-speaking people call Russia a dictatorial country, lol. You do not live in Russia, but at the same time you are talking about an authoritarian regime, although there are a huge number of opposition parties in the country, which already contradicts the definition of dictatorship :)

This fanfic is a translation of a Russian-speaking author. This entire work is publicly available on the author.today website from the author - Zang. The translation is carried out without his consent, without mentioning his authorship. The site administration hides all messages from Russian speakers and bans them by IP address. There is clearly a criminal conspiracy to appropriate someone else’s intellectual property and its subsequent monetization on the Patreon website. The Russian-speaking community demands the opening of a dialogue with the original author or the complete removal of this work from the Webnovel website Thank you for your attention (Google translator used)

Это же перевод?

Автор, ты русский?)

Lol

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