Review Detail of Dissecting551 in Springtime Shinobi

At the time of writing this review, I have read all the available chapters and can give a brief summary. The story is written in good language, making it a pleasure to read even through Google Translator. At the moment, only a small part of the Naruto world is included in the story - the academy and the Hyuga clan, but they are written well, the characters have their own personalities and goals, they are not extras for the main character. The only thing that confuses us at the moment is the question - is everything that is happening reality or is it an illusion? I understand that this may be the author's intention, the secret of his fanfic. But, honestly, this very concept, the possibility that everything that is happening is just an illusion of Madara-kun, puts me off reading But overall, the story is interesting and has potential; it’s worth spending your time on. Author, keep writing, you're doing great :) Google translator