PHOENIX_U
โข๐พ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โข๐๐ธ๐ฝ ๐ช ๐๐ป๐ธ๐ฏ๐ฎ๐ผ๐ผ๐ฒ๐ธ๐ท๐ช๐ต ๐ฆ๐ป๐ฒ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐ป:'( ๐ช๐ท ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐ซ๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ญ๐๐ ฦช(หโฃห)๐๐ - phoeni_xa2
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I'd love to, it would be better if u could add the link(^โ โฟโ ^โ )
Iโd do my best to explain but yes Iโm not a mature writer and not someone who wishes to judge your writing skills Or efforts. But yes I would love to more of your work in the futureย ;ย At the beginning of the paragraphs if you switch the speaker (when mc is talking with another lead) break a line (adding gaps). ย If a new speaker came up with new beliefs or ideas (who's not your mc/Main Character ) you can add a line break (gaps) depending on the dialogย Long paragraphs are good in detail when you're giving ideas about what your MC and what they're doing but If they move places into new events forward with times Or backward use (gap) to separate the paragraph.ย ย Information that is not related to them should be distanced by (add gaps and change the paragraph ) Hopefully this help, PHOENIX.
I have mention it before those chapters got delete from the device i was working but don't worry i would try to add them soon as I can , they were in rough drafts so it's taken time for me to edit them again but surely it'll be done . PS: Sorry for the inconveniences and Thank you for ur patience. PHOENIX.
But He IS!โจ
*I'm
well it's a way to relief so why not.
clothes are not the problem gurl it's the narrow-minded people
Some mysteries are going to unfold soon
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She screams Rich! (๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*.โง
Hopefully soon she will be so soft ,so cute (โงโฝโฆ)(ไบบ โขอแดโขอ)
lolโโฟโtypo mistake thanks for correction