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GoldenMark1mthCommentedSo pegasuses included? Or am I overthinking things?
Zoolinguism: As children of Zeus/Jupiter they are able to communicate with any avian creature because they live in their father's domain and bulls because his father created them. (I know this isn't a power shown in the books but it doesn't make sense how Percy is able to talk to his father's animals and Jason and Thalia can't XD)- GoldenMark1mthReplied to GoldenMarkCh 4 4: Push
- GoldenMark1mthReplied to Apathy_Personified
First of all, thank you very much for reading my book. Now about Sam's powers. As of now, he is essentially at his weakest. I have a lot more planned for him, and seeing as this is set in an SPC word, you bet he his going to get crazy powerful. But at a moderate pace. I think. ;)
Ch 4 4: Push - GoldenMark1mthPosted
- GoldenMark6mthReplied to spammedCh 86 Moving forward
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Foreshadowing? Or am I over thinking this?
Hah, that cougar was gonna be so embarrassed, I'm almost jealous that I won't be there. - GoldenMark7mthCommentedCh 81 Consequences 6
- GoldenMark7mthReplied to AkiraAkatsuki
How relatable.
Now, I play Honkai Stat Rail. It's been a while. - GoldenMark7mthReplied to Grand_Faust
That last one is the most important.
"The enigmatic traveling merchant, Luocha, has arrived in Liyue." - GoldenMark7mthReplied to EvfrnetCh 85 A solitary ice among the snow
- GoldenMark7mthReplied to Shankss
It would be more accurate to be "trick", instead.
He also enjoyed the show below— watching Lyney and Lynette's performance. The magic shoe they were performing now was a trick where Lyney would "cut" Lynette in half by inserting her in a box. - GoldenMark7mthCommented
*story*
'Secured.' Hearing Freminet, Isaac silently rejoiced in his heart. 'Finally... A regular customer that's store-related...' - GoldenMark7mthCommented
My God again.
Once he tasted it, a series of tastes exploded in his oral cavity. - GoldenMark7mthCommented
Man's couldn't resist making "mouth" be more complicated, huh?
"Alright then, Monsieur Isaac. A pleasure to make your acquaintance." The lady nodded as she remembered his name. She then took a sip from her cup, and soon, a warm sensation filled her oral cavity. - GoldenMark7mthReplied to Artoria_Emiya
How is this what I thought of first too, lol.
His brown hair bore a slight curl, and his deep amber eyes held a profound allure. He sported a white long-sleeved shirt with a black waistcoat and an apron on top along with black trousers, reminiscent of a barista. - GoldenMark7mthCommented
You should probably make these scene changes more different than your usual texts. For example, like "- Court of Fontaine, the Nation's Main City -".Unless, of course, this wasn't a scene change, then just ignore me.
Court of Fontaine, the Nation's main city. - GoldenMark8mthReplied to AurelLor
I agree. . . wish I could be that.
-Dragon of That Thing in the Corner or Your Eye: The Ultimate Stranger! They know you're there but can do nothing about it... on second thought, forget this one. A bit too eldritch horror. - GoldenMark8mthCommented
How true is this, cause if so. . . oof.
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