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Zaylent

Zaylent

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"Only children make choices, I take all."

2021-11-28 JoinedJapan
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    Zaylent6d
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    As of chap 19

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    Zaylent7d
    Replied to Treywhitmer

    yeahhhh, it kinda slips out my mind

    "Wow~, your a real cutie you know. I wonder what on earth happened to you?" She muttered while wiping him gently. Then lastly, she put an IV to him to replenish his lost body fluids.
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  • Zaylent
    Zaylent8d
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    the writing style is like written by AI. no hard feelings man, its just what I feel

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    Zaylent10d
    Replied to Jimmy_Cast456

    you'll know next chap or so

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: Final Struggle (End of Arc 1)
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  • Zaylent
    Zaylent11d
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    Shameless Author 5 star obligatory review. And for those whose confuse, the first arc is something of my creation and its also inspired by a movie called We Were Soldiers but only some characters and the movies plot did I integrate in the first arc. While the following arc is something in anime. And right, I wrote this fanfic cuz my mind seems to wander a lot this days.

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    Rick Jackson(Father)
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    Jessica Jackson(Mother)
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    Emily Jackson(Younger Sister)
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  • Zaylent
    Zaylent11d
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    With ponytail

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  • Zaylent
    Zaylent13d
    Replied to Dao_of_Sin

    don't dwell around it too much, it'll not be important from the whole story line

    "Semper fi."
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    ehh? I thought they were army but now that I googled it, the 1st battalion 7th regiment was a marine corps. sorry bout that, I did say it will not be history accurate

    "Semper fi."
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    Replied to BeastNaBh

    its only the first few chapters man. Promise it will get better

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: Induction And Bootcamp
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    Zaylent16d
    Replied to Jimmy_Cast456

    The first few chapters are original while the rest is a fanfic. But I did integrate the plot and some characters from the movie 'We Were Soldiers' in the first arc

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: Training, New Faces And Graduation
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    Zaylent18d
    Replied to Rochirush

    Well the first arc(Vietnam Arc) is something of my creation and its also inspired by a movie called We Were Soldiers but only some characters and the movies plot did I integrate in the first arc. While the following arc is something in anime

    Ch -2 Authors Note (Must Read)
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  • Zaylent
    Zaylent1mth
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    u rrly like ur cliffhangers dontcha -_-, anyways, that was lit. cant wait how the mc will deal with this....

    Ch 27 Back Home (2)
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    Zaylent1mth
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    nah man u dont have to worry bout dat, I gave em a peg rewl hard that made them see jesus

    In case the FBI showed up.
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    Zaylent1mth
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    yo, here to give a review btw. the writing quality is good, little to none grammatical error that you can find and the writing style is simply sublime that you can hardly read unnecessary words that inexperienced authors tend to do. tho the stability of updates is a little bit low imo but the word count of each chapter compensate it so I guess i really have no gripe with that as long as its updated. I love the way the story does not completely stay at kuoh, japan, underworld yada yada yada but explores other places and interact with other species. lastly, the character design is simply marvelous, the characters are simply not cardboard pieces with emotions akin to 2d shts but with wonderful personality that makes them alive, and their are various reasons and factors why MCs personality is twisted and that way. overall, this is a good fic with actual characters and a lil bit crazy MC and good ocs, a lil bit underrated fic(for now) imo

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    Zaylent1mth
    Replied to Asura453

    I dont need forgiveness, forgiveness needs me

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    Zaylent1mth
    Replied to Shadow_D_Monarch3

    ngl she thicc in this pic

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